 chu chu pie 2008-09-01 . chapter 6 please please and let kagome have her baby in the water |
 aj_is_awesomenesa854 2008-02-21 . chapter 6 this is one of the sweetest stories ive ever read(possibly the sweetest!^_^) and you should absotutely (excuse the spelling) make a part 2 ... i mean... would you want to dissapoint the whopping ...wait ...let me check ...92 people that have reviewed your story not to mention the people who were so heartless as to not review such a...-voice softens-...wonderful story...YOU ARE SO UNDER APPRECIATED...overworked and underpaid U.S.A...U.S.A...free tibet free tibet...if i am elected president...only at matress giant ooh aah...yahoo-o-oo...another little baby child is born inthe ghetto...in the ghetto...think outside the bun... NO WHAT IF I WANNA BE SENATOR NOT PRESIDENTA ...AND MAYBE I DONT WANNA GO TO MATRESS GIIAANNTT.. MAYBE I WANNA GO TO ...MATRESS ...LITTLEPERSONSMALLFRYSHRIMPTINYTIMWHOSAWHATZIT AND MAYBE I WANNA GO TO GOGLE WITH 2,0,0 Os I CANT STAND THAT YOU KNOW WHAT ...IM GONNA GO TO NOW THERES A WELL ROUNDED SUCCESSFUL MAN anywho ...OH MAYBE I WANT TO HAVE MY MY BABY BORN IN THE SUBURBS OR CHICAGO ...OR SATURN... OR MARYLAND OR WISCONSIN AND...WHATS SO GREAT ABOUT THE GHETTO ANYWAY HUH HUH HUH HUH CAN YOU ANSWER ME HUH ...AND MAYBE I WANNA GO TO SOME PLACE WITH A DAMN CHIHUAHUA AS THE SPOKESPERSON "AI CHIHUAHUA TACO BELL" LET ME TELL YOU ...NOT CATCHY NOT FUNNY NOT im done... ding-dong...lucy im home ...ping fries are ready...oh and uh you know...love the story...part 2...bye...bye |
 Inu~kag4EVA!!!!! 2006-12-29 . chapter 6 SO CUTE! |
 hotmiko1 2006-05-16 . chapter 6I don't mind but please DO! |
 .... 2005-06-17 . chapter 4 AH! HE ATE HER!" Shippou screamed. "THEN INUYASHA GOT LONELY AND ATE HIMSELF!"
"Shippou, thats not possible." Sango said with a sigh
"Sure it is." Kaede said to Shippou
ONG I find this so ** funny |
 cutie-wutie-pie 2005-03-17 . chapter 6This is very interesting storey I am happy my friend recamended it to me I hope to keep you on my author alert and read many more of you storeys |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 6 nice very very nice! u r the 1st god story ive seen all night!brvo brav and all that jazz! |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 5 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!HO-HO-HOGIE! U R 2 FUNY!HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 4 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha! SUB-SUB-SUBWAY SANDWICH! |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 3 bwa hahahahahahahah! im feeling evil!hahhahahahahahahahahaha!and now its gone... i miss evil!! |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 2 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! you made me laugh while i was laughing about 50 first dates!stop it! it-it hurts!bwahahahahhahah! |
 Moon Child 2005-01-19 . chapter 1 cute much! |
 dog-demon3 2004-10-15 . chapter 6THE SESSHY AND KOGA SCEANE WAS SIDE SPLITTINGLY HILARIOUS |
 dog-demon3 2004-10-15 . chapter 5IT WAS FUNNY BUT IM SO CONFUSED |
 dog-demon3 2004-10-15 . chapter 4HHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT WAS SO FUNNY AGAIN IT WAS SIDE SPLITING FUNNY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAAHHAAHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHAH |