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Judging Black Rose 2007-11-11 . chapter 1
I love how your stories are about Daine and Numair with this twist ... I do't know how to explain it but they are amazing!
Celtic-Dragon-89 2007-06-18 . chapter 1
oh! this is so sweet!
Leni 2006-07-11 . chapter 1
aww that was sweet. but why is t here no magic anymore? wouldn't it be passed on through the generations?
AtticusBlackwolf 2005-07-26 . chapter 1
really good!! Keep on writting!!
WildMagic33 2004-09-02 . chapter 1
OMG! that was amazing! now i have to read the sequel.
Savi2070 2004-04-25 . chapter 1
Wow, Your story is really impressive! I like it very much, you could really expand on it... i've never read any of the "tortall's future" fics out there, not like there's many to choose from! I could just imagine the badger walking up to her and berating her for being so clueless about magic! Hehe, well, I have to go, i love it! Good writing!
Savi
Bluie Twilight Star 2004-01-06 . chapter 1
Neat! Is this in an alternate universe or is it from this one. Is there a Tortall in the universe that this is in, or is it now in someplace in this world...
Dancing Amethyst 2004-01-04 . chapter 1
aaw. The time frame is a bit weird, cuz they werent much more advanced in the twelve hundreds to the fourteen hundreds, and they didnt go get ice cream, but i get that it needed to be like that for the statue to be there. it's very sweet, I wish you would write a chapter of thier parents reactions, but it fits nicely like this, so its ok. Thank you for a beautiful story!
~*FlamingKnight*~
i'm about to hit submit, and i realize, i havea story similar to this too, but for Alanna rather than Daine. It's not posted, just an idea thats been in my head for abotu a year, but it is a descendant finding a statue of the lioness, but i THINK shes going to go back and meet her, so perhaps not quite the same... i'm mumbling, sorry.
kicks99 2004-01-04 . chapter 1
nice...please update soon
not important 2004-01-04 . chapter 1
I really liked this story. It was sentimental without beng mushy.
Mage d'Argent 2004-01-04 . chapter 1
Lovely! Very sweet. I would be interested to read an account of their deaths; the clues in the epitphs are intriguing...
ElspethElf 2004-01-03 . chapter 1
I must admitt I was a little daunted at first by the fact that Daine and Numair are dead in your story, but I am glad that I have read it now for, indeed, it IS s very sweet story, written very well. Well done!
Divine-Bovines 2004-01-03 . chapter 1
I liked it. It was very sweet and a little sad but more... hm... I'll think of words later. I really did like it.
Lily A Evans 2004-01-03 . chapter 1
I LOVE it. It's written beautifully (ugh, I hate spelling that) I love the storys plot. I love how you discribed everything. It's great.
CrAzYhOrSeGiRl88 2004-01-03 . chapter 1
that was so awesome and original! i loved it...i dont know if this was your intent or not, but i got the idea from the grave stones that numair died defending daine or something like that...cuz it said 'you gave the ultimate sacrifice for her, so we place her next to you' or something like that...yeah..well...anyway, great job, and i of course loved it! YOU SHOULD DO MORE D/N STORIES! ^_^
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