I'm kinda upset at how you portrayed Jubei-sama. You make him out to be a selfish jerk who neglects his daughter. I actually wonder if we were watching the same anime. Jubei is supposed to be a kindhearted samurai who puts his soul into swordsman ship. In the second part, he actually has a daughter who he loves and cares for.

Oh me likey, seriously. That was really deep, and they way you wrote it increased the affect. You should definately continue on this, or better, write more stories like this, so keep writing. Bai!

very interesting...