OK, well, I read your story. You said that our story, PotC: Jack and Black was a lot like your story. I read your story and wondered just how much of our story you read. Our story and your story has one thing in common: They involve two chicks picked up in a pirating town by Captain Jack Sparrow and William Turner. That's it. Our stories have no other similarities. We have at least 9 OC's versus your 3. Our chicks are not extremely obvious representations of ourselves. We have a totally different plot line. We have fewer plot holes. Our characters stay in character in our story. If you're going to throw around accusations of similar plot lines suggesting plagiarism, take the time to read both stories extra carefully. I have never heard of you or this story before I recieved your review. However, it was a good story, and I look forwards to reading more of your story. Andrea, the co-writer of our story says it wasn't like ours, and was confused by your review.

I'm so sorry, but Rae just talks and acts like
a teenager, one who has been sheltered and one
who is young, inexperienced, unable to think
beyond her own needs, and somewhat shallow.

Your take on Jack Sparrow (Capt. Sparrow, sorry),
is very good.

Sorry, but "Captain" Rae sounds and acts like
a 13 year old girl who's been daydreaming.
Hallucinating? Deluded?

She just doesn't sound like a mature person,
much less someone disciplined enough and hard
enough to be a Captain. Very few of experienced
sailors became captains; none of them was a woman.
I don't know the percentage of how many women
were pirate captains compared with how many men,
but it was exceedingly small, and you can bet
they were hard, crass, tough as nails women
with little delicacy.

? Sounds like Will and Elizabeth are
cohabiting without the benefit of marriage.
Immoral and, in those days, might land
Will in jail. It's difficult to get interested
in a story that has modern morals and modern
names (Rae?).

otherwise, your skill as a writer is very good
and your grammar is okay. I just don't see Will
and Elizabeth as being loose and without morals.
Those were the days when sex started on the
wedding night...which explained why so many
young men were so nervous that night.

AHH! keep writing! I cant handle the stress!

please update this is excellent brillant

Hey!
Great story so far! Humorous and interesting. Romance wise. Bring on the drama! Hope you and Jen make chappies longer, though don't abandon the fic now. Hope to read another updated chapter!
Kit

This is gettin good hehe =), write more!

I love the story! It keeps me interested and certainly wanting me to read more. Hurry up and write the next one! I love the way you put so much of Jack's character into the story w/out ruining it like a lot of people do. Great story line, and excellent plot. I heard once that you can't write an interesting story w/out knowing what you are doing, and also not having diction. Which yuo seem to have total control of. So keep up the good work!

Juvenile authors-insertion with the usual undeveloped OCs, nonexistent plot and many grammar/spelling mistakes...the run-of-the-mill FanFiction stuff; truly nothing to write home about/recommed.

A good story, kinda funny, Keep- it up

(We fixed the chapters so now they should be more clear, before some of the dialogue and stuff got clumped together and it shouldn't have been)
Chapter 9 should be up tomorrow or Monday

still pretty good!
-kitty

Hey I'm one of the authors of this, I'm SO glad you guys like this story :) We've got more chapters coming, muahahaa, keep reading.

Thank you for the review and the link to your fic! I always appreciate being told about good stories! Update it soon, please!