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o-see-no-evil-o
2006-05-12
ch 20,
abuseWow, Great FanFic!
Lucas is great (as always) and I'm lovin Ronilyn. And I'm glad Merlyn got a mention, shes the best. Ending was beautiful, you never see it coming, but it is kinda obvious if ya think about it... Anyway, keep up the good work!
Mel
2004-08-29
ch 16, anon.
abuseHi there, I thought your fanfic was good, especially that you have a good feel for the characters - the way they speak is so natural I can see them.
By the way, if you're really into the show there is a petition to get it released on DVD, so here's the link if you're interested http://w.PetitionOnline.com/agdvd/ . I'm sending it to everyone coz the only way to see the show at the moment is pirated copies from TV. sigh.
Keep up the good work!
J. Travis
2004-07-27
ch 20,
abuseI've been out of town forever it seems like, and I'm so glad to find you finished your story. I loved the ending. You stayed completely in character for Lucas Buck; I can picture him telling this woman she's no threat while, deep down, he's hoping his own threats will sink in and cause a bit of a panic. Ronilyn is a strong female character which is great. It would take someone of moral fortitude and strength to stand up to Lucas, great story!
Kath
2004-05-19
ch 20, anon.
abuseWow...great ending!! Now I understand why you had to leave the letter to the end! Lucas never saw that one coming, did he? :) I really like that you left it open for sequels; I know they could really give each other a run for thier money. I have totally enjoyed this story and the writing really drew me into it. Excellent job! *round of applause*
J. Travis
2004-05-07
ch 19,
abuseFinally, I get to be home and have some time to read a little fic. As usual, I like where you're taking this story, and I love the idea that Lucas Buck would rather see his cousin safely out of town than be forced into protecting his interests. We all know how that turns out with Lucas-bloodshed and chaos. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Kath
2004-05-05
ch 19, anon.
abuseAh, finally that letter comes out...and then you stop. You are so mean! :) I love the way she doesn't back down to Lucas. I can't wait to read the next chapter; I have an idea of what is in that letter.
Kath
2004-04-21
ch 18, anon.
abuseUh-oh, someone is not happy the recent string of events! :) I have a feeling there are going to be some fireworks! They are both such strong, willful characters, this should be very interesting. I like how you wrote this chapter...kind of spooky with the lights going out and her creeping down the stairs. Great imagery!!
J. Travis
2004-04-15
ch 17,
abuseWell, well, well, so Lucas is stuck between that proverbial rock and hard place. It's nice to know even he has to honor his promises. Oath-breaking was a serious offense in most of the major religions, past and present, and often included that the children of the traitor would also suffer punishment as well. Yeah, I could see even Lucas Buck hesitant to break a vow. Very cool story so far. Can't wait to read more.
Kath
2004-04-06
ch 17, anon.
abuseI knew you were holding out! :) I'll wait and read patiently...as much as I can! All I could think of when I read this last chapter was, "and the plot thickens". More please! :)
J. Travis
2004-03-27
ch 16,
abuseI just happened upon the American Gothic section this evening, and I love your story. I really hope you've got more planned that you'll share soon. You've really got a knack for writing Lucas Buck.
Kath
2004-03-27
ch 16, anon.
abuseYea...I had a feeling that's what they agreement was! Oh, Lucas is NOT going to be a happy camper! Ronilyn will certainly have her hands full with him. Hey, I was reading back over the chapters again and I couldn't find where any part of the letter Ronilyn received was detailed. Hm...are you holding out on me? :) I can't believe it just hit me! I know you are going to tell us soon, right? :)
Kath
2004-03-10
ch 15, anon.
abuseI agree...they are more alike. At first I was wondering if the wolf was one of Lucas' "pets", but it wouldn't have listed to Ronilyn...would she?? Love the mayor's name by the way!! I can't wait to find out what the favor and idea that he has agreed to are. I'm lovin' this story!!
Kath
2004-02-24
ch 14, anon.
abuseAnother good chapter! I love the quote about Family; gag is right! :) Hm...what could his father have done? I'm still not so sure that it wasn't Lucas, but he seems to be sincere. The plot thickens, eh? :)
Kath
2004-02-16
ch 13, anon.
abuseWow...that was a zinger there at the end! She certainly knows how to push Lucas' buttons, doesn't she?! I chuckled at the first part too where she tried to call on Meryl, and the Casper joke too. You keep writing...I'll keep reviewing. I am really enjoying this story!!
Kath
2004-02-12
ch 12, anon.
abuseTwo more good chapters. I really like Ronilyn's spunk and that she doesn't seem to put up with Lucas' attitude. I have a feeling these two cousins are more alike in some ways than they realize. I wonder if Merlyn will have anything to say to Ronilyn or about her? I almost forgot about Gail...interesting that she is brought up here. I can't wait to read more...as usual!
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