I just read "Sole Survior" and this story is just as good. The way you desribe his blood lust is truely terrifying and also the aftermath. You write some of the most incredible X-Men fanfiction...please keep it up!

I cracked up when I realised you'd reinterpreted dogtags to mean something rather different. Excellent story. More please. Great stuff.

Wow, you write really well. Your use of words and great grammar made me feel like I was reading the work of a pro... too bad it was only 1 chapter! You really capture the emotion and made me intrigued. What happens next!