aw... would this still work? please update? :D

Oh no! This story isn't complete?! This is really good! The characterizations are just perfect and I absolutely love the plot. I found myself laughing out loud several times. The writing is also great, I only found one spelling/grammar error throughout the entire story.

It's unfortunate that this looks to never be finished. :(

GYAH! you cant end it like that and not update @_@ Please.. PLEASE update when you can! Im addicted @_@

Ari chan

And so it begins! Awesome job once again XD

ari chan

I love how Kenshin gets all posessive like that XD But I also can see how annoying it can be ._.

Ari chan

Omg awesome job @_@ Im chocking with anticipation...

Ari chan

*gasp* Kenshin found out! =O Awesome job XD Keep up the great work!

Ari chan

Aww.. Poor Kaoru =/ I hope her guilt doesnt make her sick T_T

Ari chan

Oh! I likie! =D Awesome job! XD

Ari chan

I stumbled upon this story mistaking it for MadamHydra's fic. I am glad did. This story is very good. It's a pity you put it on hold. I hope you don't totally abandon it.

Hello XD
I have just read this story...I know I'm in late of 3 years...I'm sorry ç.ç

But I think that this story is very beautiful^^
and is a sin that it has stopped so...The idea is great and it si too much good.. I hope that you will update again it...


Sorry for my horrible english

Great story - you've gotten Kaoru's character down really well, and I like how you show the more possessive side of Battousai.

you can't just leave this with an ending like that, right? I mean... the cliffy is killing me! Nice job with the suspence by the way, very nice. please, please conitnue!

oh shit! this just cant be any good!!

IT WAS SO GOOD! I waited till I finished to review cause it's easier. I can't wait for the next chapter!