I suppose this was the end? It was a good one. I liked the way Lindir was the person who wrote 'Gil-Galad was an Elven King' and I also enjoyed the brief appearence of my favorite hobbit, Sam.

Very interesting still. You write so well. I can't wait to see where the rest of this is going.

Poor Lindir. I hope he does go back to Imladris soon. I liked this chapter, particularly this line: 'Have you ever known parting to be joyful?'

First, a nitpick. Lambi Casarinvë is "Languages of the Dwarves". "Language of the Dwarves" would be Lambë Casarinva.
Now I can say that I think it was a very interesting idea to use objects in this way to illustrate connection between Elves. And of course I am honored to have a part of my poem included in a good fic like this one.

I thought that was what he was seeing! You have shown how the Elves would react to the terrible news very well.

Poor Lindir. He has grown up quite a bit since some of your earlier stories, but he still remains the same. This is another interesting plot, and enjoyable so far.

Very good start to another promising story.

Very interesting so far. I can't wait to see the next chapters.

Excellent writting. I can't wait to see the next chapter.