Another review from me! I couldn't resist, really, knowing that there was a sequel. But don't expect another review from me tomorrow, I have a test. ;) Maybe in two days.

Hmm. Where to start. My favorite chapters were 13 and 14, the club chapters. It was a lot of fun to read, especially since you got the characters down so well. I especially liked it when JP and Pietro pulled Rogue in to dance with them. A nice touch, for me personally, since she's my favorite, and it's always bummed me out in X-men: Evo that she didn't get to experience normal teen stuff like that. It was really touching.

The whole thing with Alex being gay... I liked it, actually. I could really feel for him, especially when he talked to Scott about it. It was believable. I also thought Scott's reaction was very realistic, since I'm an older sibling as well, and would pretty much be feeling the same way as him.

Wanda and Sam - who would have thought? But I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop them in the next sequel. And I had a feeling that 'Berto and JM would split up eventually, though it did make me a little sad when it happened.

And most importantly, I think, great job on JP and Pietro... especially JP. I never read the comics and only watched the show, so you've really done a great job in this one in making JP a real character to me. :)

Cheers!

I keep re-reading this chapter over and over again, because you know what? you described the stoned feeling SO WELL ahahahhaha!(and also because its even more funny when im high hihi) I love this. Jp and Pietro stoned that's ** funny. I imagine them having the munchies at super fast speed. I have the munchies at super fast speed so imagine them 0.o I guess it would be more like super super super super fast speed. anyway. Just have to congratulate you on that beautiful writing. I'm glad you didnt fall into the stereotypes of weed --i'm always disapointed when writers write a high badly...they think its the same as being drunk. but its not -_-
and btw.."Normally, these things, this particular brand of chips, made him want to retch. But goddamn, he’d never noticed how much flavor was in one little chip"
that is GENIUS and is so true, thats my thing..with nachos :D
okay now ill stop the rambling
have a great day!

I think that falls into one of the top ten chapters I've ever read. You got it right. Very few people who write slash even come close.

When I was scrolling down to click on chapter 14, I glanced down and read the title of the last chapter. Which nearly gave me a heart attack, because I thought that you were going to kill Pietro. I'm also the type of person who can't jump to the end of a story and read it first, so I consoled myself with the fact that you'd listed it as a humor fic, however, and that (hopefully) you wouldn't be so cruel as to suddenly smack your readers with an unexpected character death. :)

This is one of the most unique, enjoyable fanstories that I've read in a long time. It's tough to find a writer as good as you are on so this gem was quite a pleasant surprise. (I particularly liked how Alex's brother was weirded out by his gayness, but his roommate was cool with it. That was an unexpected quick that actually fit when I took a moment to think about it. =D)

I've also suspected that Pietro is gay for quite a while, and it made me laugh to find someone who shared my suspicions. (And while I'm normally not into guy/guy stuff, whoo! _Nice_.)

Thanks for writing!

Is the art teacher being named Howlett because Wolverine's real name is Howlett, and in X-2 he said he was the art teacher? Or was it a coincidence?

On the theology note, what's your take on it(god)? From what you wrote in this chapter (Look Mom! I'm being psycho-analytical!), I'm guessing you're kinda like me: raised christian, but are currently atheist(/agnostic). Or perhaps you are in one theological group, but have close friends in others. Am I right? (Only curious, but I would be interested in your answer.)

P.S.- Congrats on the previous chapter, marvelous smut. Took me awhile to cool off after that bit of slashy goodness.

Hey, basically I have three things to say a)your writing kicks ***, don't let anyone (even yourself) tell you different, b)god *da-yum* was the smut hot! and c) it sounds like you've taken a philosophy or theology class or just thought about it alot, because I'm taking a philosopy class and have thought about it alot and it basically sounded like a slightly less devout-Catholic mix of mostly Jeanne-Marie, with sprinklings of Wanda and Bobby.

Hey, only me. I was reading your other two fics, while waiting for you to update your latest one (update, damn you!) but was not compelled to leave reviews for any other chapters (as I think I've mentioned, I hate reviewing after a story has been finished).

However, I have just finished this chapter, after staying up until 1.57am to read this far, and can I just say two things?

Holy **.

That was so totally amazing, I don't think I have ever read anything so fantastic in all my life. I love JP and Pietro, as paired in your fics, but WOW!

I don't think I've ever read such a brilliantly put together sex scene EVER. It was so emotive, and graphic, without being crude or cheap. You managed to give details to the boys' thoughts and feelings so perfectly, hot damn, I'm straight, and even I was feeling a little turned on! (Probably shouldn't have admitted that, but what the hell)

Well done. I feel I must read more. And update on your new fic, will you?!

I think the theological debate you had going on was really cool, actually. My belief's seem to be somewhere between Jean-Paul's and Wanda's, so it was great to see them articulated so loquaciously.

That was long, took me most of the morning. Utterly worth, it naturally, but I'm going to have to take a break on before I move onto the sequel. Lunch oughta do it.

Oh yeah, something of substance for the review (I tend to forget and leave people very vapid little squealings, which are of no help). I love fics like this, where the plot is the romance. There's no huge crisis or apocalypse, no one dies, and overall it all works out pretty well. As usual, adoring the characterisation and details. I keep wondering if JP and Quicksilver wouldn't end up having really fast sex, being teenage guys and all, so they really do deserve each other. Would be a bit harsh on anyone else if either of them went at their full speed.

Uh... yeah. Loved it.

I keep being scared that this is the last chapter, and then it isn't! Yay!

Okay, now I feel slightly high. And very giggly. Uh, clearly your fault. Damn you being such a good writer. Yes. I really shouldn't just have tea for breakfast.

Yeah I just read part of the third story ...but I just had to read this chapter again...oh god...^^ I could just read that over and over again. Like that dance scene..in fact I think I will read that.

That was Brilliant! i loved it now that i finally got chance to read the second one. i liked the twist on the story and it honestly had that feel like pietro would tell it that way..

Very cool story. I didn't read JP and JM in the comics, so I wasn't too familiar with them, but I like them here. JP's a real trip. You just want to smack him and hug him at the same time.

Glad to see Rogue have some fun in this chapter. Even if they're gay, there's just something about being sandwiched between two hot guys on a dancefloor. yumm. :-)

Good chapter. I do like slash when it's well written. :-)