wow, this story was great. You write wonderfuly, and I read your bio recently and am pleased to see that you are older than I and can write so well. I look up to your writing hoping I can find a way to make mine better. Thank You for writing and actually updating your stories, and for your reviews to me. I'm expecting a new story out of you soon I hope, take care.

Another cute story.. you are so talented.

another good stroy. IS tehre a sequel?

I am checking all fic, so...great fanfic! :-)

beautiful story! i havent seen any s/b fanfics that are as good as this one! i hope u write more s/b fanfics soon!

What a great story. I laughed, cried, and yelled. It was just as good, if not better, then house of dreams. But even thought you are a B/S shipper, i think you left off in a perfect spot to write a Jesse/Lexa story, with Shal and bren in sanctuary. Please write one, i am sure everyone will enjoy it

Aw it was beautiful! I loved it :D You did a good job! I'm looking forward to reading your next story :D *hint hint* lol

Yeah! I really like this story! Brennan and Shalimar were always meant for each other! This story really showed it!! Got to admit, this was a perfect ending to the story! I would like to end this review saying, "Once together as friends, Love will keep them together till it ends." :)

Love the ending. Especially with that part from "leaves of grass". :D

I loved this entire story! It was GREAT!

What can I say now that is over? Maybe that I wish it hadn’t! Or maybe I am too excited to say something after reading this final chapter! It was so breathtaking! And so was your story! I mean we were all eagerly expecting updates from you because when reading your story we were living into another world. And your story had absolutely everything that one can desire: adventure, drama, fun and lots of tenderness and love. I love that balance you usually kept in combining all of the above! And the end was a emotional one. It said a story of its own. So I guess what I am trying to say is that this was a beautiful story. And we all want more! This was just …great!
Viviana

This was really a great story. It's a shame the little girl had to die. I really wanted to cry for Brennan. The end was perfect. Adding the quote was inspired and a more than fitting end. Very, very nicely done.

Beautiful.

Okay, I must say that was definitely an excellent chapter!! I loved how you referred back to the title sort of...Walt Whitman, perfect for Bren huh? lol Great great great story! Hope to read more B/S fluffiness soon, now that this' done! Excellent job!

I'm so sad this storyhas coem to an end. I loved it, I really did. Hope you write another fic soon. Ciao:)