*claps* Ack, more angstiness, it makes me sad T.T Have I mentioned that you're very good at this? This was pretty good - the plot seems like it would fit right in in the actual PSoHs universe, and their emotions are very complex. And sad T.T Good job!

Alana: Aw that's so cute yet sad *sniff**sob*

Leo: girls!

So sad! But beautiful anyway.

OMG, why are all the D x Leon fics so SAD?! Horrible! You maybe should write a short continuation of this one and have them admit to certain feelings...? (*nudges and winks*)
lol! Well, maybe not, it's awesome by itself... Actually, I think I'll add this to my favorite stories! Thank you for a story well-made!
Ja ne... [ (_ _) ]

*tear* This is so very depressing. But for some weird reason I just LOVE depressing things. And that's why I LOVED this fic^_^ So congats on earning your way into my fav stories and authors, luv ya, bye

Yuki Haitani^_~

... i love it. the pure simplicity, yet honesty from count d amazes me. *hugs you*

This was a great fic I like it as a one shot but i also think that it could be continued very well

Great job writing from each character's POV. They're very close to the real thing. Only one thing: whatever happened to the girl and the frog?

Wow! That- that was GOOD! Both characters seemed like themselves and it really did feel like both of them were trying to hold back. Good job!

Aww that story was soo touching, it was so well written, D cant dissapear! :O:O No!! Please writr more? PLEASE??/ yOU ARe a very good writer indeed

That was good. It was also sad. I liked it, so nice job.

wow, i recently got into Petshop of Horrors and i love it!! i especially love D. ohh this fic is soo nice yet sad. It was well thought out and neatly done, i loved it! keep up the good work!!

Oh, I like this. It is lovely and sad. Thank you for sharing it. I could picture the whole thing very vividly in my head.

i love this pairing so very much and you depicted them both so well. aw! its a sad fic, ne? but its lovely. count d is so beautiful!

Nicely done. i think the fact you've kept all the emotion *just* below the surface is very effective.