 Kate 2006-07-18 . chapter 2 It's goog so why don,t you update! i want the 3 chapter! so please do it!! |
 1400th Hokage 2005-11-07 . chapter 1Cool |
 Gerbil X 2005-01-20 . chapter 2Mind making it more, well...romantic? |
 Gerbil X 2005-01-20 . chapter 1Hey its darkkairi "waves" great story but needs lil more romance. |
 Harlequinny 2004-11-10 . chapter 2YAY!
I would just love to leave a helpful, eloquent review, but I'm afraid that your level of writing is far higher than mine. I am in no position to critique.
Trish seems more "troubled young woman" than "hardened demoness" in this fic, but it does make for some great stuff.
I'm so glad! ^_^ |
 Keahi Mitsahima 2004-07-20 . chapter 2Dramatic, I love it! Update! |
 Yuki Valons 2004-07-15 . chapter 2I hope you update soon! This story have me hooked...Dante seems to be acting a little cold towards Trish though... |
 Trinity Archangel 2004-06-23 . chapter 2 ONE comment, request, rather. I could not finish reading becasue of the damn reoccuring Chinese or Japanese symbols, whichever. If at all possible, could you fix that and resubmit it? |
 TA 2004-06-23 . chapter 1 There's something dangerously possessive about Mr. Dante, and I like how he treats Trish as propertly and not a person, though it is evident that he desires so much more. Just like gals to set another man up to block. Nice move, Trish. Here's hoping heads will roll and clothes will fly in Chapter 2. |
 Harlequinny 2004-05-30 . chapter 1Very nice! I know this review is very late, but I've been keeping this story on my favorite's list, and I really wish you'd update it. |
 Elizabeth 2004-02-16 . chapter 1 I love it!! Its really good!! Write more! Please! I'm hoping to see something more go on between Trish and Dante. Its nice when he's so rough with her! Good job again, you're really good at writing. Nice detail too. |
 Latia 2004-02-06 . chapter 1 Great fic, you should keep writing. |
 KindCalypso 2004-01-17 . chapter 1This is really good. You should update soon. |
 Ariana 2004-01-07 . chapter 1 Hm this makes me think. Trish hates him and he always stops before going to far and yet he seems jelous? Nice very nice. I love the concept and your writing is splendid. Keep it up! |
 Bustahead 2004-01-07 . chapter 1 This is amazing. Absolutely amazing. I beg you for an update.
The way you portray their characters is amazing, and you can catually FEEL the sexual tension and frustration that Trish expereinces when she's let down.
Please update soon. |