Interessting story.

CCAP

Totally wicked :D

I liked it, a little odd, but good. :-D

I like it. It is a nice story.

Lov it

Vary good work keep up the great work!

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I love it! D Well written, though unexpected.. Draco seemed like a man-whore and that amused me greatly... I was filled with giggles. Giggles and sparkling unicorns... and Chuck Norris.

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What happened to Colin?

lol queen of Narnia! Halarious! good story!

What the Hades? T.T I really love your story! I really do! The entire thing was so wonderful! I really like Lucius's possessive personality and, well, everything else too! The way you wrote the story and the characters were beautiful, you could see everything going on so clearly in your mind, great job! Sometimes, though, I feel as if you're adding the right amount of details in parts of the story, but then, the next part is not the detailed. It's kind of weird for me at least. I really, truly love your story, but that ending came out of nowhere! It's like a car crash with a truck! Oh wait, nvm, but it's like surprising, very. I think you could have made this story longer, like a multi-chapter story. There's some parts I feel you should have clear up, like what were Neville's nightmares about in the first place? And going into details around Narcissa's death,too. Other than that, I think you should really had made this into a longer story, and well, the ending was really adupt for me. Anyways, great job! Besides the ending, everything was amazing! Keep writing!

Well its 3am and I'm not really capable of sugar coating at the moment, so I just want to apologize in advance. The ending sucked. Don't get me wrong the story was good. You had a really good build up going but then it reads like you just got lazy and chopped it off.

Oh, that was great. Totally loved it. Not to mentions the hot intimate scenes P

love it

_DoesHappyDance_You Go Neville, and GO HERMIONE! A Shoe String? I Would LOVE To Know How She Managed That! Lol

YYWKMN.

This is my second reading and i enjoyed it both times do you have anything else good? This story is well writen

Well that was anti climactic