i liked itover all its good

cute but maybe you could do a sequel about their married life... and also a story that fills us in on the 1 year before they were married like how he proposed and what happened...

Great story! Really enjoyed reading it.

and if you're so good at telling me what to do, then why don't you say it in my face? like not be anonymous?

So, I see Kelly, that your purpose is to tell me that my story is retarded? sorry if you don't like it, but it doesn't give you any right to tell me that it's retarded!

He still got up because his sleep was gone.( is sleep was gone? ok how lame is that!? all u had to say is he got up anywayz. It was almost nine o'clock and Gage was on top of the hospital, waiting for Walker.(do i even have to say it?)But she didn't leave, waited until Walker and Trivette got on the chopper and then whispered in Gage's ear, "While you're away, try to figure out how much I did hear." And she left leaving an astonished Gage behind who couldn't believe what she had just said.(now that is a good line)

When she had gone, the baby started crying and Gage, who wasn't sure to call her or not, took the little one in his arms. To quiet the crying child, he sang for it. When he finished, he saw Melissa standing on the doorway, looking at them and smiling, (once agian retarded)He went back to the hospital because he wanted to tell Walker ad Trivette about his success and also check on Syd.(ok when writting a story dont put b/c because i think we already no y he did that! duh!)He didn't hear or see as Syd got out of bed, went to him, kissed him too and whispered softly, "Good night to you too."(retarded too!)

She hates him for killing her children and she never blamed Gage." (this part is retarded)As he entered Syd's room, Erica left it because in Gage's eyes she saw the look of a hurt man and didn't want to interrupt what ever he would say to her. ( this is retarded) I couldn't even imagine my life without your smile, your jokes and stories about your life. You must come out of it because I won't be able to live without you. Syd, you must live, I won't be able to walk my path of life without you on my side. Syd, I love you.(and this is retarded)

When the door closed behind his back, Syd slowly opened her eyes and whispered, "I love you too."
( but this part is a blue ribbon)

I really enjoy the story, the wedding was really cool. You should write more stories. And I have to say, what KC-Piper-fan said it's true, an empty gun doesn't make a sound louder than a simple click, but don't worry about it, good story.

Good story. Enjoyed it. Audra

Nice job. I hope that you consider writing some more stories. You did a nice job.

it was a pretty good story overall. nice job!!

Good story. It would be interesting to read about their wedding. Keep up the good work. Audra

That was a great story. Yes, do continue I want to read their wedding. Keep up the good work. UPDATE SOON!

Loved the story. I like the idea of more chapters of fluff!! PS. Just for your information, when a gun isn't loaded it won't make a firing noise, it just clicks and it's not very loud. Just thought I'd tell you