Awsome. I found this through a sketch on i loved the sketch and I loved this story. The humor was awsome as was the whole. Great job.

Hey--I would just like to say that I am impressed by your writing skill. This story is great--I love the romance and the way you portrayed it doubly so. An actual, well-written Trunks/Pan fic--refreshing to say the least. :) Keep it up!!

I love it! ^_^ Why is the rum gone? Oh, yeah, that's right. Trunks and Pan drank it all and played fun little games full of sexual tension... Mwaha! I absolutely love this story. It made me all happy. Onto my favorite stories list it goes. Great job.

hey this is so awesome!

An amazing story. Great plot. Well written. Fabulous read. Loved it with all my heart and so should you. A+

hey i like this one too good work on you're stories i've read all of them..i'm one of you're fans.

Since I read one of your stories, I've started reading your other ones, cuz you're a wonderful writer. Please continue writing. I especially like romance stories having Trunks in it, cuz I'm his number one fan. Thank you for sharing your talent of writing. :D

YOU SHOULD STOP MAKING STORIES CAUSE U SUCK BIG TIME! AND U R A **!

Nice! It's really nicely written! Too bad it's only a one shot...

You always amaze me. I love your works, you're always so good with summing up in a few pages what would take me chapters to write. Once again, I love the emotion you put into this T/P, it made my heart swell right with Pan's.
And I always love your Pan. Her character is so wonderful and pleasing to read when you do it. Keep up the good work, after all, I know what it's like to write something on the side just because the 'main story' is too hard to get inspiration for. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the T/P relm next.

SO Good! Please write more!

I LOVED IT! This was so good, but you already know that I'm a huge fan of your work. It's almost a shame that this was a one hot deal. I think I would like to know what happens when Pan tries to get Trunks to admit his love for her as well. Maybe that could be another one shot story? Perhaps?? I know that I would definately read it for sure. So continue writing and making me happy. Until Laters. P.S. You are still working on "You will be mine" Right? I love that story. The update on that was awesome as well. Laters.

really good though alittle under rated ( in my opinion)

Wonderful!
I love how you managed to edit out the lemon nicely and how you kept playing around with the idea of lust, consequences, and games.
Fabulous continuity and use of Pan POV (basically).
Definitely something I'll read again!

I loved your story,it's very well written. It's nice to see an author who puts out lengthy and meaningful chapters, rather than many short ones that seem to be whipped out with little thought. I look foward to the next installment^_^