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rachel 2007-05-16 . chapter 9
WTF?! you can't end it there! Thats ...sniff...not fair...Uwahahaha!
NO. 1 BEYBLADE FAN, FIA JAMALL 2006-05-22 . chapter 6
HEY! great story! Ya know, good Beyblade stories are SO hard to find, and yours is one of the best! Write more after this, ok? Good luck!
storm-of-insanity 2005-07-12 . chapter 9
i don't know whether i liked that ending or not because i like tala but then you gave me great pleasure by reading tyson's death. mwhahahahahahahahahaha. i hate tyson. of course if it had been kai then i would have to avenge his death but sonce it's tyson you have my thumbs up
Alanua 2005-06-11 . chapter 1
NO!
No One 2004-12-20 . chapter 4
i absolutely loved this story beggining to end. Please write another fic similar but with tyson/hilary action/adventure genre!Later!
Archangel Rhapsody 2004-10-09 . chapter 9
Dude, that was not the ending I expected but good.
Beybladecrazy 2004-02-26 . chapter 9
Please can u do a follow up of what happens to Tyson.
please
please
please
and did i mention please!
Ashla (too lazy to sign in) 2004-02-26 . chapter 9
Lol, this author alert is 2 days late. Took it long enough.
I'm gonna miss this fic! T'was very good ^^ MEAN ENDING!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
Moonlit Kaitou 2004-02-24 . chapter 8
Sorceress Vanessa: O.O ::dies::
Vanessa: >< Sorceress, NO!
SV: x.X
Vanessa: Damit, I think she really died! Um... oh boy. lol Well she really liked this story tons Bayleef, until you killed Tyson so she umm... dropped dead, but dont worry I think we'll be able to revive her here soon.
SV: x.X
Vanessa: Man she's looking bad, anyway... really loved this story Bayleef! You did a really great job and can't wait for more!! ::Gives you cookies:: ^^ So see ya lata for now and good lucks! ::Drags SV by the collar to the hospital::
SV: x.X
MsHobgoblin 2004-02-24 . chapter 8
YOU KILLED HIM?
How could you?
Awesome story, I enjoyed reading it.
Hob x
Timmesque 2004-02-23 . chapter 8
Me: AND WHY THE HELL DID YOU GO AND DO THAT FOR?!
Cs: *hides undernaeth the bed* o0; Never realized she could get so scary...
Me: *growls* I should flame you, but I like this story too much so I won't.
Cs: *still hiding* Update!
Russa 2004-02-23 . chapter 8
Hi! So, this is the end, huh? It's kind of weird that Black Dranzer couldn't defeat Dark Dragoon. Although, then again, Black Dranzer was never as strong as he looked. And Tala helping the BladeBreakers save Tyson was totally unexcepted. And so was this ending. Tyson was saved from being killed by Dark Dragoon, only to be killed by a spider-pocessed Tala in the end. That's just sad, and stupid. It's almost like saving him was all for nothing. So, yeah, other than this totally bad ending, this story was great. I guess. Well, keep up the good work and I'll catch ya later. Cya! ^_^
ice suzaku 2004-02-23 . chapter 8
oh.my.god. evil! but.. update soon!!
Scarlet Witch 41 2004-02-23 . chapter 1
hey, this is cool man...
ducky76 2004-02-23 . chapter 8
I love your fic! you killed Tyson :( I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope you can update soon
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