very interesting start to the story. (:
i loved your descriptions, especially in the prologue, and the description of the men at the bar XD
priceless.

x

Great Story

I stumbled across your story when I was browsing this morning, and I have to say, it's one of the best KOTOR fan fics I've read, hands down. I love the way you melded Firefly with KOTOR. It's a perfect fit, and I can't believe I didn't notice how much the characters resembled each other before. Great work, and I can't wait to read more!

Ayama15

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

OH MY GOODNESS! I loved the ending.

That was beautiful. The lyrics go absolutely perfectly. I'm inclined to read your other stories now too. Gracious--I need to play KOTOR II. My friend told me it was such a depressing game though...and besides, Carth isn't in it. *sniffle* I love Carth. He was like...the sole reason I was playing KOTOR until I found out I was Revan. ROTF!

Props for an amazing read. Took me only a few hours though--you could make your chapters longer. But your descriptions are eloquent and precise if not always verbose. Love it. :) I've been hoping to write a Revan/Carth one shot...so maybe I'll try my hand at it. I could never outdo you with a sequel anything like this.

~Stormy

PS

I think it's really funny what you named your Revan figure. Jaia Sin. My Revan figure was named Juriah. (dunno what her last name is...*shrug*) I found it easy to read since I was so accustomed to my name, and yours was quite similar to it. *heh* Very nice. LOL!

Fricking Bastila always has to go and do something stupid doesn't she!?!?! Oh my gracious, I should have killed her at the Star Forge...*shakes head in shame* One of these days, she'll have to stop having these ridiculous moodswings of hers.

Kick her out of the Temple! *boos Bastila*

Still lovin' the story. :)

~Stormy

Wow. I got REALLY scared there for a second that this was going to veer off into some random OC fic. Thank God it didn't. This is fantastic.

I can't help but see Revan as the girl I played in my game (I played the black haired asian chick, whoot-whoot!), however--you still handle her personality in a way that is universal and I'm sure appealing to the several people who have played through KOTOR as a girl. Her personality is real and raw, and I'm so glad that you captured that! ^^ As for Carth--he's only my favorite character in the whole game, and you have got him down pat. I knew he'd never betray Revan that easily. Can't wait to read more! :) Thanks!!

~Stormy

Excellent story, but... damn I hate those kind of endings. It tears me up when they lose a part of themselves, or their memories. Far more than when those same characters die.

In summary, I'm hoping the Sith win the next war. Delightfully bittersweet; a wonderful read.

I love it. Canderous is on Serenity?

wonderful!
i was a little skeptical about how it would all work out, but it was perfect.
thank you!

:: sniffles::
A happy yet sad ending. I like it!

Poor Carth...

This epilogue makes me want to read the whole thing over again.

...

I might just do that. Always love your stuff!

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I just wanted to say that this is by far the most emotionally moving work of KOTOR fanfiction I've read to date. The last chapter had me on the verge of tears...and though the epilogue offered a bit of hope, I still couldn't help but feel utterly sad for Revan and Carth, here.
Experiences and memories are really so much of what make up a relationship. But I like to believe that what Carth and Revan feel for one another can survive even a Jedi mindwipe. After all, it doesn't seem like the memories are gone--just, well, hidden.
But seriously. This seemed really...realistic. That there could be no happy ending for Revan as Revan. But it's still a little bit sad, to know that she's going back to her past being a lie contrived for her "happiness." I suppose that living without the guilt of Revan's actions may counterbalance that...but you wrote a beautiful story, here, with an ending that was happy and sad and heartwrenchingly dramatic.
I probably wrote *way* to much here for just a review, but I feel you deserve it. (I hardly ever review anymore...but I couldn't help it.)
Just...incredible work.

Ah, I liked that. Thanks.

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