That was anazing and butiful.

excellent job. wonderful. *this* is how fanfiction is supposed to be written. you deserve a standing ovation. i would say perfect, but nothing is ever perfect, so i give it a 9.9. transitions, style, flow, format, you nailed everything. not even one typo to correct. wow.

aww, poor Frodo... ::giggles:: there should have been some more action, ya know?? ::winks:: but this was very lovely none the less. peace love n sodomy

Aye, good. I found it quite intriguing. I love stories of Frodo and Angst, and this one was quite good. Good pace, and choice of wording. Well done.

Sweet! I love the memories and the way you put them in. This story was really good.