0.0 that was really good! did you really write that? wow i wish i could do that! bye bye for now!

HOLY CRAP! AMAZING!! WOW!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Beautiful and haunting. I wish mine were that way.

wonderful, a little strange with wording, but wonderful none the less!

your lord and master?

Wow, it's a really good poem.

Dude, that has got to be one of the most kick ** poems I have ever red! I'm pretty sure the "girl from a time he couldn't understand" was ::Kagome:: and the Hanyou who fell in love with the girl was ::InuYasha::, and last and defiently least, ::Naraku:: was "a black demon from the fiery pits of hell!" Anyways, I really enjoyed this. Write more soon, cause I said so, THATS why. TTYL, Luv Ya, BI~! ^.~
::KIA:: Minokoe

...O.o...?.? confoozled...oh! oh! did they die? ^_^ ...they did...? ooh...*feeling really stupid right now*...they did...huh...okay I think you seriously need to cut the crap on the olden stuff and use vocabulary we all know about...I mean, seriously...okay, that's all I had to say. ^_^

yay. angst.
Your Lord and Master, Foamy?

This is really good! It definately has that dark, mysterious sound to it. It's so tragic that Inu and Kag had to die though. *sigh* Such a sad poem.