This was a truly memorable, great story! I loved the way you conveyed the depth of emotion here while keeping everyone in character. I hope you'll keep on writing.

that was really good for a one shot. nice job!

I guess I am also reviewing this really late, but I will do it anyway. That was such a great story. Quite humorous too, I must say. I actualy had to try to keep from laughing out load when Zak released the bat in Briza's face. I never thought I I would ever heard about a drow priestess making a fuss like that over something like a bat. Keep up the great work.

probably a bit late for reviewing, but I'll do it anyway. This was a really good story, and I could really see it happening. This was so much better written than about 90% of the stuff on this site, and I congratulate you on that too.

Salaam alaikum,
Drow Elf

Xal dos zexen'uma wun l' elamshinae d' Lloth!

You show very well, that Drow aren't always cruel gits with Balrogian manners ;-)
Drizzt is such a cute, kind, innocent... YES,INNOCENT! *drizzt will you marry me?* Hey, I didn't wanted to write this! Will the story go on? Pleaazee!

OMG! I love it. Drizzt and zak are my favorite chars. You did a great job, keep ,up the good work.

omg!..... that story was so cute..

*gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* *gape* THAT WAS SO GOOD! CAN YOU PLLLEAAASSSEEE MAKE A SEQUAL?!?!?!?! pllleeaaasssseeee!! im begging you! you haaaaaave to! ppleeaaassseee

Great story! I really love the description and "I told you there was a bat" *imagines the story and laughs* Nice job! I also like the tenderness between Drizzt and Zak, nicely done.

that was such a sweet story!! i thought it was very well told.

This is one of the best Drizzt/Zaknafein fan fictions I've ever read. I really got into it. It made me smile and laugh. I especially liked the ending. Very emotional. It also stayed true to the characters.
'Will read more soon. =)

Nice, touching story and so in character for both Drizzt and Zaknafein. :)

How cute! And it picks on Briza! Really really good. *GRIN*

Awe. I always wished Zak would have gotten out with Drizzt. Really well done.

That was really enjoyable. You write Zacnafein very well. They were so in character, it could have been written by Salvatore :)