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Taiki
2004-03-09 . chapter 6
Good story! I like it! Can't wait for more! ASAP with more please. Chow!
Astaldotholwen
2004-03-06 . chapter 6
Excelent! Excelent! Excelent! I can only imagine the glaring and upset nature that is going to be our little Gippal ^-^;;
I can't wait for the next chapter, have a great March Break, if you update before the 22nd, I won't be reviewing, I'm going to Europe, but I am sure it'll be a wonderful chapter nevertheless *grins*
Randomness
2004-03-06 . chapter 6
hey!awesome story, will be looking for updates, keep it up :)
xInsanoBananax
2004-03-01 . chapter 6
Awh that's so cute ^.^ I can't wait to see how it all turns out!
Mistress Arianna
2004-02-29 . chapter 1
This is a great story! I love how you've written it out. Everyone is acting according to character, which is a really hard thing to do for some people.
Congrats and Keep Updating!
DaggerQuill
2004-02-21 . chapter 5
and then they will meet...
Nobody123232
2004-02-21 . chapter 5
This is the epitome of glorious--absolutely /stunning/ in its own separate way. I've never been able to relate to Rikku so well, and I'll admit it's new for me. You've gotten her right on the dot, and I don't believe another person could write her as well as you do. Most portray Rikku as a happy-go-lucky soul with no true emotions, but you've given her empathy and life with everything attached, her real feelings coming alive. Dealing with an Auron-deprived reality and trying her absolute best to convince others she's /alright/ has been so convincing through your third person narrative. WONDERFUL job. Glorious.
And now Auron's back. THAT is going to be certainly interesting. And Rikku will finally be happier, let's hope. But I have a hunch things won't get happier too soon. You'll make it believable, and it's going to rock. I'm really excited now, and even with Gippal around I still think Rikku and Auron deserve to be together. I'm so proud of you for going through this fiction so far! You're awesome, Beth, and I hope you have a lovely weekend. ::hands over a box of truffles::
Your friend,
Jen
MeowMix2
2004-02-21 . chapter 5
wow, what a great fic! You better update soon!!
xInsanoBananax
2004-02-03 . chapter 3
O good story! I'm a fan of both RxA and RxG. Keep up the good work!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues
2004-02-01 . chapter 3
Oh my God!
Rikku , Gippal and Auron!?
Talk about a love triangle! I don't know who to turn to, now! *whine* Tidus and Yunie have finally found each other! *sigh of relief*
( Haven't finished playing ff-x2 yet...) And Lenne...I actually, have an idea of who that is!
Well, I 'll stop blubbering. Contiue and keep up the good job.
Till the weary night begins a new song,
Girl who sings the blues
DigiSim
2004-02-01 . chapter 3
If this is set after what happened in FFX-2, shouldn't it be in that section?
rock-star-vt
2004-01-15 . chapter 2
Wow..this is really good.
You have a good style, albeit a bit different. You do dialoge (sp) very well and are really IC the whole way. Good job. I will be checking for more of this.
>Rockstar
moonjump05
2004-01-15 . chapter 2
Good style, but lacking in setting description. Otherwise, do I see a love triangle? Heheheheh... Baralai and Shelinda? Someone should write a story about those two, humor of course.
why log in? I'm not updating
2004-01-14 . chapter 2
Wow, this is actually pretty good. I read it thinking I would just use it to kill time, but now I actually have another story I'm looking forward to reading more of in the future. very well written!
Karmina Scarheart
2004-01-14 . chapter 1
this is really good! i'll keep reading! besides, this could help me with my fanfic, similarly trying to bring someone back from the farplane. seeya!
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