short, but i think i'll keep going

I LOVE it. Im glad theres a story where ZigZag has a big role in it.

Hello it's colled new paragraphs

MEH, Devon-sama, I wanted to read one of your fanfics, but I don't read the fandoms you wrote in! -slaps with a fish- Oh well, I LURVE YOU, DEVON-SAMA!

~tera

No sweat; I just had to re-do my first chapter for when checking over it; HELLA! I was good grammar wise but that's because my sentences were missing words.

Lololol! *sigh* I'm glad I didn't have to kill Teddy... Murder isn't my thing... Too messy... Unless its like Hillary Duff or Kylie Monogue or someone (No offense if you like either of them, but Hillary always annoyed me, and I've hated Kylie ever since I saw that episode of Queer Eye for the Straight Guy when she actually got to touch Kyan and Carson, and be in the same room with Jai. Yeah they're gay, who cares! They're damn hott! lol). I've been reading your story for a while, since about when Chapter 5 came up, but it never occured me to review. Sorry!
Thanks for reviewing my story too, you're one of my favorite reviewers, and you left and I was like, "Where'd Ziggygurl go!?!?" lol. BTW, how was your trip to Mars?
Use my characters anytime! I love making characters! If you didn't make the connection, I'm Kacie. Sorry if you didn't figure it out.
Can't wait for the sequel!

Interesting, but PLEASE use the enter key.

*sigh* she died... in fire... I am in a way both relieved and upset... I dunno why...

I dont like Teddy... May I kill her? lol

Teddy is evil!! Some one should nock the stuffing out of her. How cruel?

confusing, because it's just one, slopped together paragraph. please separate the stuff, it's hard to read. too late, u already wrote like, 39 darn, slopped togther, paragraphic, "chapters". Camp Greenlake is for bad boys: "Take a bad BOY make him dig 5 feet"--Dig it.

HEY! Do you know you have 2 chapter 22's? Well i just wanted to say that.

This is a really awesome story, i dont know why no one's reviewing... Just so you know, I've been reading this story for a while now, but I just never reviewed...

i don't get this, this iz a good story & only 4 reviews well making mine count 5 this iz good keep goin

nice!! i like it, keep it up! btw thx for the review, i appreciated it :)
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