Sorry and no offence but this 2nd chapter made me really rather hate Anne, and i've never actually hated her character before, seriously. It was partialy the fact that it bugs me, a whole lot, when the characters acuse Angel so much of having sold out or as such, i mean out of the whole group he was the one who hated the idea the most and the only reason he took the job was for Connor, not the money or the comfort of it or anything so that part sort of annoyed me i suppsoe, as you can guess of course.

Thats just... thats just sad... (*Sniff*)

Pretty sad story. Even sadder because the whole situation is caused by the show's inability or reluctance to resolve the whole Buffy-Spike renunion issue without Spike leaving Wolfram and Hart. They should just handle it off-screen somehow. In the present fic I'm writing I have Spike getting word to Buffy shortly after he stops being a ghost. I think that's the way it should have happened.

I think Spike always using nickname for everybody. He also called Xander boy too beside Whelp. Andrew? Cannot remember.. Anyway, Anne show up.. Interesting

sad fic.. oh boy

I wish you wouldn't use the word "boy" in regard to Gunn. It sounds racist.