keep up the good work

Awesome fic. Though you do tend to use periods randomly. You have some word usage issues but nothing major. I would suggest you use italics for thoughts or use single quotes ('...') to distinguish them from actual speech. I also suggest that when you pause, usually in speech, that you use the sequential periods (...)before continuing the sentence or being a new one if the character is trailing off. Oh and another note. Sesshomaru's name means "Killing Perfection" not "Born to Kill". If you need references, Wikipedia would be the best as this is where I learned all my knowledge of the anime/manga. Other than that, kudos to you. ^_^

Great job,I really loved it.What was the name of the son in chapter 20?I read the lyrics & thought it sounded like a great song.Keep up the great work & catch ya later.

ugh!why do most stories featuring a Sess/Kag fling, Sessy always ends up dead! what is wrong with you crazy people!

hey! i really thought that this was awsome! lol anywho ill be a checking u out for more stories soon! smiles brealene

this story was incredible. keep it up

um well at the end of this chapter u give a description of the characters just to let u know 497 lbs is way overweight
2oo or so might be a better for the guys and like 120 for the girls

oops sorry its hachi not hitch gomen nashi

alrite ive been wonderin dis 4 a while y r u talkin 2 hiten i mean sure hes hot but dude(or dudete), y? other ppl usually talk 2 da cast. & y pirates? dat kind of weird no ofense.but im still luvin da story *_~

Amazing story...I loved it...keep it up

I got to be amused! yay!

thank you for the wonderful story!

DD

Curious, isn't the flower called a Forget-Me-Not, not a Remember Me? Unless there is actually a Remember Me Flower?

I once read a sad story. It was a Kagome Sesshomaru stroy. They had found each other in the future and all that. And then it showed how both of them died. Kagome died of cancer and Sesshomaru of a plane crash. It was so sad. But at the end they found each other in death.
I'm not trying to be angsty either. It really said that Kagome was waitning for him to die in the inbeteen so the could crossover together. So very very sad. I never read that story again. I like happily ever afters.

AW! That'[s such a SWEET story! AW! You're an amazing author also!

I had read this story before but not up to this chapter, I'm glad I accidentally discovered your website! This was marvelously written and sweet.

-Dani.

Miroku's descendants r still priests? Wow. hehe.