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dlove 2007-01-03 ch 10, anon.	abuseThroroughly enjoyed reading this fic. I particularly enjoyed the scenes between Jack in Sydney shortly after her return... "It'll just hurt. Whatever your thinking must have happened to me your're probably right. Don't make me describe to you..." Billiant. Love the scene between Dixon and Sydney. You really captured their tension and those things that were left unsaid. Her hesitation, his hesitation and those little things we know of their relationship. Most writers tend to smooth over their relationship, either not capturing it very well or disregarding how important the two of them were to each other, especially during the first two seasons. Bravo for their one meeting and thank you for not leaving it out. Very good idea to tell the story backwards, telling the story in the usual chronically order, might have worked, but it adds some resistant and makes you wonder even more so about the events that lead to Sydney's journey and I think strength of the story lies there and they way you chose to tell it. Sure I'm curious as to her relationship with Sark and the baby. In your intrepretation of Sydney, she is clearly defined by the baby and their is some resemblance to canon, but she is written so sparsely in your story, intentionally or not, I like it. The scenes back at the compound in Kiev are brilliant. Not very dense nor graphic, but to the point and heartbreaking.
AidenB 2006-04-14 ch 8,	abuseAw wow. This is brilliant, I was writing something similar a while back but since I'm a little OCD I deleted it. I'm glad I did or it would have been competing with your story!. You've really taken time on this and created a complicated dark angsty story (the best kind!) and I would be interested in any tips you had (I'm still young and lazy with my writing!). Anyway, in terms of the story...its really great, the characters are the way they should be and although I'm completely confused I think I'm putting the piece together. You've put your own story and style to something that was already there. Its very good. Lastly, I am also writing a fic about Sark and Sydney having a son, its basically a series of angsty drabbles and I'm glad that you've made their son the way he is, it makes it believable and I hope I can do the same in mine. Excellent.
weiss-weiss-baby 2005-10-05 ch 10,	abuseGosh, I feel so horrible for Sydney and that poor little baby! I love the part where he started walking, that was really sweet. I hope you update soon!
RosieW 2005-07-04 ch 10,	abuseOh gosh! Excellent, excellent chapter - there were some parts that made me flinch - the ankle in the door especially, ick! and I loved the flashbacks - I can't wait to see more of Sark and Sydney's evolving relationship. Great work.
electric pancake 2005-06-30 ch 10, anon.	abuseHOLY MACKEREL! Repeat that seven times in your head. I HAVE NO WORDS. (other than) This is the most amazing Alias story I have ever, ever read. You must finish this one day, then continue it from the starting/ending point. Whenever you do, I'll read it, because it's so worth the wait. (and here's where I start to gush) It's so much more than a story, it's an experience and just wow, don't ever stop writing. Sleep? You don't need sleep! Write! Always! I'll leave now!
Verity Kindle 2005-06-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseOkay, this is an exceptionally well-written and tightly plotted story. The relationships are complex and the dialogues crackle with energy. I can appreciate all this and still be totally confused about what's going on, because it's backwards. Ack.
katie 2005-06-29 ch 10, anon.	abusesweet
phi4858 2005-06-27 ch 9, anon.	abuseI like to add more encouragement to the reviews you received for part 9 and I want you to go on even this story is really sad and a little hopeless. Nevertheless I want to read more and of course you returning to the present time to finish off this organisation and Sydney fear for her son eating her inside up. I had to check if you're still writing and you're (in may) so there might be hope for following parts as you announced a part ten?!
freakyClaudia 2005-04-03 ch 9,	abuseYOU CAN'T STOP NOW!
inquisitive1 2005-03-21 ch 9, anon.	abuseMore? Please... I'll beg and plead if I have too. And I'm bad at begging... unless its Christmas or my birthday.
Running 2005-01-11 ch 9,	abuseahh, i'm so lazy that i can't be bothered to sign out of this account. actually, it doesn't matter at all. I read this ages ago and i don't know WHY i didn't review. so here it is. kind of. i absolutely have fallen in love with both your stories, even though i'm not a fan of the sarkney. on my other account, the quality of your stories made me rethink my list of favourite authors and stories as some i had just didn't compare, and you'll now be added to favourites on this account. i can't imagine how difficult it must be to write something so detailed backwards but you do it so well that it blows me away. i hope this review encourages you to continue this story a little. all fanfiction should be this good. and i'm very slow, i only just realised that we don't know if christopher is the baby's name so that just makes me want to continue reading even more. i really hope you keep writing this. byee!
raven black 2004-11-17 ch 9, anon.	abusewow um it was really good i would have like it if it would have gone from beggining to end -raven
server47 2004-10-11 ch 9,	abusegod its good i know its not real but damn it seems it
server47 2004-10-11 ch 8,	abusethat poor baby and how he responded to grass and the tree branch stuffing it in his pockets and the detail about how he reads sydneys emotions so good
server47 2004-10-11 ch 7,	abusei love this story its so good so so good the detail and the plot and that little baby boy is adorable

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