Well this hasn't been updated in so long, but it feels wrong not to leave a review regardless, especially having read all three parts to this point. Its an engaging story, it certainly kept my attention well enough, and that's a hard enough thing to do trust me. I've enjoyed it all immensely, and you certainly have a way to describe gore and emotion from your characters with little effort.

I noticed your grammar and spelling improving throughout as well, its nice to see a story develop, and its writer with it. I tip my hat to you (especially for using Mighty in the story, surely one of the more underused Sonic characters on this site, poor guy). If your orignal version of this got published I shall have to keep my eye out for it.

Hope this looked and read ok, despite being fluent in English, I'm still better at Welsh.

Ok, I'm a paitent man and I guess can wait.

Hey, I know that her mother and brother were part of the whole beatings and everything but what ever happened to her father. Did he die or just leave early on?

I read chapter 18 a few days ago, so I guess I owe you a review...

Well, I'm glad we got some closure on Meredithe's CO, man that was gory, but I'm pretty gore tolerant (Being a fan of George Romero's "Dead" Trilogy built me up for situations like these).

Poor Niya, what's to become of her?

To top that off, why's Kalika hurt by the light so darn much? Is Darkness behind her current suffering? Just guess I'll have to wait and see...

P.S. Due to another MSTing, and some other fanfics, it'll be a while before I can get to the MSTing of the first In the Beginning, but rest assured, I will continue it and post it on !

Until then, entertain yourself with that site I gave you the link to, there's lots of Sonic SatAM fics they make fun of there, the "best" being "Orcium" "Chaos Race" and "The End of Mobius."

For anyone reading this review, here's the link to that site.

Good luck, and tell me when "The Bridging" comes out...

Are you kidding me? ha

I'm a horror movie buff, do your worst!

Great to see you've finally updated again, but my only gripe is, wasn't Meridethe's CO captured with her? and if so, why wasn't he put on trial too?

Y'know, now that I mention it. I'm looking forward to seeing some kind of war scene between Humans and/or overlanders and/or Mobians. Can we expect anything of the like in the future?

I agree with your stance on FF.nets policies. I think script should be allowed because as a South Park fan, I know for a fact that South Park is MEANT to be written in script format(I know that's not what you were complaining about but...). And now the South Park section has fallen from 1024 fics to 231 in only a month because of the gayass policy. Now no one will touch said section with a 50 foot pole.

What could you have possablely done that would meret having your fics removed?

That has to be one of the stupidest things I've every heard of!

Whatever is going on I hope it goes alright.

Ud: Wow. Incredibly short.

Me: Sorry about having some of your stories removed. Ya know, you're right. There are other out there who are far worse. But anyway, not much going on in this chapter.

Ud: Hopefully da next chap be comin' sooner. But if ya post dis somewhere else, we'd be glad ta hook up wit dat link.

Ud: ^.^ Yes! I knew it! Ya are brin'in' 'er back! (jumps for joy)

Me: Though I doubt it'll be on good terms, since it might have to do with the Darkness.

Ud: o.o (stop in mid-air) T_T Ya really know how ta kill da moment, don't'cha?

Me: Can't waot ta see what ya gonna cook up next!

Shemp: Hit by a bedpan fer peekin' at 'er boobies...(snicker)

I hope nothing too bad happens too Meridethe though. I'm not sure why but I really feel bad for her too.

Me: Those two chapters were very short, yet emotional.

Ud: Wit Niya gone, dings have definately gone became woise.

Me: Worst yet, the darkness has made "her" next move.

Ud: Poor girl...why she hafta die...BRING HER BACK DAMMIT!!

Me: He means Niya. And Mighty has officially shown a side to himself that no one would probably want to see.

Ud: Update soon. Why you call any of this corny in beyond my comprehension...

Well, thats a sucky power.

"if you use it, you and your friends will die"

A power to sneeze when ever you want, would be more usefull than that!

It may have been a little short, but it was great for showing a little more insight into that the evil "thing, woman, whatever"

And I might try to bug you a little sense you don't car, don't worry not very often though. :)

It was definitely worth the wait!

I kinda feel sorry for Meridethe, sure the whole betraying your friends looks bad, but she didn't have a whole lot of choice.

And anytime you feel like two updates in one day, thats great by me!

Me: YOU UPDATED!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!! (Halleluah plays in the background)

Ud: Da jail break's a near success, 'n' da only thang left is ta find da escape route!

Shemp: Hope Niya's gonna be okay...

?: Ha ha! Soive 'er right, da li'l - (Ud upper cut da bastard, him into orbit, but not without yelling): YOU F**KIN' JERK! (sound of a very hard thud heard from a distance of 35 football fields)

Ud: Please ignore any 'n' all comments made by da peanut gallery, aka Id the Imp, aka my evil pink colored clone.

Me: Very exciting! The only gripe that I have is still da friggin' spelling and grammar. And don't worry, we forgive you for taking this long to update.

Ud: Keep on truckin' girl!