Hi there

I usually don't review if stories haven't been updated in a while.

But your fanfictions is truly captivating. Every chapter holds so much details, it's written with love :)

Snape's and Harry's reactions are realistic and I am glad I found this story. Such a pity you haven't updated in years. Looks like you abandoned it.

LOL. Ok, so usually I reserve writing reviews until I'm up to date with the current chapter number... but I had to this time. First off, I'm liking the story so far. I have come to really enjoy Severitus stories (which is hilarious, because I used to loathe them!) and this one is quite well written so far, and a great read.

So, on to why I comment now: Your choice of name for the Snape's would-be daughter is Keaira... mine is Keara. It was just a fun surprise to find someone who would use the more uncommon spelling of the name(mine's another variation. It can also be spelled Ciara and Keira) and would know the meaning of it! :)

Anyway, thanks for sharing this story... I'm on to the rest! (I notice you haven't updated in a while, but I hope the story is finished someday).

Keara (another little dark one) ;)

I hope you will continue to write this story, Resolutions, it has a lot of good characterization, and lovely flow to it. I hope to see more soon

please write 10 more chapters or twenty more it would all be worth reading.

me again :D

anyway I just wanted to say how great this story is/was and how I wish you would pick it back up again. Over two years since you last updated, but I guess I can always have hope. Intelligently written, and definitely enthralling, I couldn't stop reading. Please write more

So first I want to tell you what a great job you've done so far. Next I want to point out that you spelled the word "savior" (at the end of this chapter) wrong - you said "savor". Although it may seem like nitpicking I feel that this critism should be looked at from the view that out of 11 chapters, this is the only thing I could find to complain about. I think it says a lot about your writing. I also greatly appreciate your unique perspective on the Snape is Harry's father fics. I can't wait to read more :)

and here i thought i had already red all the good severitus stuff on this site. but there comes your fanfiction! it's bloody brilliant! i love the relationship snape and harry have going, its so snarky and mistrusful, just like the both of them. i hope to see some update in the future ) this fic is totally worth waiting for

will you ever continue this story? just asking, because its good story, really believable and its pity to let it die...

wow, I can't wait to find out how the party at the Malfoy's goes for both Severus & Julian. I get the feeling that Ron won't be very welcoming/perhaps more likely antagoistic towards Julian. I think the twins may be more open to getting to know Julian, whereas both Hermione & Ginny may be tentative in getting to know Julian.

Harry/Julian, still seems very confused about how he's feeling about whats happen/hapening, as it all seems to be happening at such a fast pace. I'm glad that he's been able to connect in someway again with Remus. Will Remus, be able to detect because of being a werewolf that Julian is the child of Severus & Lily? As this fact has been true in some fiction stories, what do you think?

Continue! Continue!Continue!Continue!Continue!Continue!

Interesting.

Uh, I have a feeling it will take Ron and Hermione a long time to see the virtues of Julian Snape. In all fairness, though, Harry would have been just as judgmental in their place. Not that it makes it in any way better... Poor Harry.

I have to say, this is a very good story. No character is one-dimensional, and the premise is rather interesting - I don't think I've ever seen a Severitus start with someone trying to maintain Harry's appearance, rather than the appearance coming apart. It has a rather dark tone, although I can't really put my finger on why. Probably because of the intense emotional situations - neither Snape nor Harry are fluffy and, the way the story is going, I don't think you're planning to take the easy way out on anything. Which is of course what makes the story good )

It hasn't been updated in a while, but I hope it will be again...

That was great. I liked the part with Remus being the peacemaker. Update soon.

well done

I for one think that it's great that you put passion into your writing and include your own stuff, very good work

as for the "nobody notices" bit

just think, it's not you, it's other people being too stupid to notice so keep it up :)

You have done a great job with this encounter. It is extremely in-character for Ron to react to Julian in this way, and also for the rest of the Gryphs to mistrust him. Poor Harry!

As I said a few minutes ago on my review of chapter 15 (read them this morning offline), MORE, PLEASE! :-)

I really enjoyed the latter portion of this chapter, especially. I love where you are going so far with this story. I hope you were not offended by my comment earlier on about your misuse of certain words. This problem is distracting, but the story is so good that I don't care. Did your sister start beta-ing for you later on or something? Or have you just been polishing your language since you began?

I get the feeling you are not a native English speaker (from some of your A/N comments), and if this is the case, then I congratulate you on your abilities in this language.

I also want to encourage you to update as soon as 'real life' allows you to do so. Now that I've caught up to you, I am anxious to keep reading your story!

This story is going great so far, in spite of its myriad malapropisms. I am really enjoying the story line. I apologize for not reviewing earlier on, but I'm reading offline mostly.

I'm off to read more!