Very well written! I was feeling what it must be like inside Joker's mind. Very good stuff. I will point out though, that I don't think the Joker would ever admit that he loves Harley, not even to himself, in the safe confines of his own mind (but then...is that even safe? lol). And I love this story.

Whoa, that was incredible. I absolutely loved this, especially when she first walked by his door and he could feel her standing there. And the last line is so haunting and perfect, wow! Anyway, fabulous story.

'I knew I loved her then. Not because she was crying, but because I could see in the reflection of her eyes that I was.' Wow, that was . . . so powerful.

I don't think I've ever read a Joker one shot as amazing as this one. I'm blown away. Normally, I would leave a much longer review than this one, but I'm honestly just speechless. There wasn't a single moment in here that I didn't enjoy.

Sensational job.

Sincerely,
HoistTheColours

I have one word for this story: "Unbelievable!" I can't even begin to express how mind bogglingly good this fanfiction is. The mixture of pure insanity and lucidity is stunning!

To summarize this short-story in two words would be hard...but I think I would say Powerful and Thought-Provoking. The descriptions and thoughts going on throughout this are genuinely gripping. I love the way you protrayed Joker and Harley's relationsip.
This is going under my insant faves.
~ Chaotic Deviance

Good story!

It's rare that an author tells a Joker story from his perspective; getting into his mind is a little bit daunting. You did a nice job with it! I loved the song reference; it's a good one for them. And just a good song in general. The only criticism I had: I wasn't sure if your Joker admitted a little too much to himself? I don't know; he seemed introspective and ration to an unusual degree. But, of course, I say "your Joker" for a reason. You can make him whomever you want him to be; it's your story. ;) And I liked the dynamic of their relationship here. Well done!

wow. this was absolutely breathtaking. the way this story is written is just so professional, as well as the vocabulary. this was an outstanding story. i am just so speechless right now i don't know what to say!

*applauds vigorously*

F*ing brilliant.

At times it is a bit unclear but the characterization was good.

There are no words...

This is so beautiful and so terrible and so real. I'm actually crying. I've never read a better Joker's perspective. You really have him down. Brilliant.

I wish there was a word to describe this fic that I've never used before because this was like nothing I've ever read. You are so talented, I mean it takes a great writer to pull off writing the Joker in first person but an incredible writer to actually pull some emotion out of his character. you did both and for that I applaud *Whoopee* :D well doen on this amazing fic !! - DD

I... am...SPEECHLESS!
That was pure amazing!
Hands down the best Joker fanfiction I have ever read!
I only wish I could write like you -sigh- Beautiful, my dear.
It seems like you really got into character about this. It was beautiful I got a little emotional.
Wow.
Good job. I hope to read more from you.
Love
Val.

That was certainly a beautifully thought provoking read. I especially liked the slightly disjointed way you wrote the jokers thoughts.

Wow, this was a really incredible fanfiction. First of all, before I start, I just wanted to know how exactly you got into the mind of the joker? I want to write a fanfic as well, but I'm finding it very difficult to get into the Joker's mindset, so I'd love to know how you accomplished that--it takes talent. Okay, no the review: You truly captured the joker's character, I could hear him saying/thinking almost everything that was written. The line "you can't forget what you can't fully remember" was especially powerful because that's the case with the Joker: not even he is clear on his past. I also love the "clubbing" part, the dialogue/thought process there and the actions he takes are very true to his character. I really love this because it allows you to get into his mind and figure out what goes on in there, how he works things out. I think the last part with Harley was one of my favorite parts. It really tugged at my heartstrings, I actually cried. I like how with the dialogue, you don't have to say exactly how he sounded when he said it or whether or not the answer was abrubt--less is more and you did that very well. I think the only thing that bothered me slightly, and I'm no expert on Joker/Harley stuff so forgive me if I'm wrong, but although Joker does have strong feelings for Harley, something like love, she was more of a pawn that he could easily manipulate to do his bidding. This shows more of him just really, truly loving her, which is great because it's different. It's just slightly off. One more thing, I really loved how you got through the fact that he is insane, no matter how much sense he makes, and that the Joker has no goal of getting Harley in bed, because he doesn't. Sex would do close to nothing for him, so that is very true to him. I'm sorry this is so long! Great job!

this is AMAZING!!
wonderful, each and every word was great.
loved how you wrote this.
very passionate and i got teary eyed towards the last few
words.
i love it! & you made me fall in love with him, lol.
thanx for writing this piece :]