come on its been ages and i've left you alone but now i'm going to bug you again. please continue all the stories i like are being abandond its very sad :(. so many people want you to update, how can you upset your fans? oh, and happy new year :)

I think you should update :)!

wow. you really need to update.

please update.

ok you have to write more. this is one of my favourites and i wont let you abandon it. remember you have 23 three chapters that means if i need to i can write 23 reviews. so write more. thanks.

keep writing please it's really good one of the best Angel ones i can find but could you add in Darla a bit and write more please!

this is so, so, so, good please, please, please, write more.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! this story is really good!

okie...great story so far...just one little tidbit i'd like to point out...one...i'm pretty sure her name was drusilla...and two...if you remember correctly before he was turned "william" was a little wimp like wesley (sp?) anyway...he was obesessed with poetry...and he had a giant crush on a rich snotty woman...named cecile was it? anyways he sent and wrote he love poetry...really bad love poetry...and he was turned down by her because (in her own words) he was "beneath her" yea...i'm a little overinformed...

interesting.. lorne? anyway keep it up as usualy story is amazing

Alright. i think your story's really good so far. Like I said before, longer chapters is the key, but you realised that, so I'm not going to say anything else about that. Like I said, your story is very good, and I hope you feel better! Write! Write! Write!
-liamlover89*

LOREN! YAY!

I must admit, when I first saw this story I didn't think I would become so obsessed with it! I have just read the entire story that you have posted and I am now having serious withdraws. This is entirly your fault. You made this wonderful story and now all I can do is mope and brood in style untill you update again. *sigh* Such is the life of a fanfic junkie...
The chapter might have been short but it was no worse than any of the other chapters. Are you going to eventually get Buffy and Angel together? Since they are my favorite couple ever I am so rooting for that! I also want Dru and Spike to stay together. They are just too cute together! I have a question though, are you going to make Gunn and Fred a couple? That would be great if you did.
I must agree with Tigeress419 and beg of you to add Doyle into this story! If you don't know who he is or have enough grasp of his character I for one will be more than glad to help you out! Doyle and Cordy were just adorable together... *hint hint*
Love your story to pieces in case you haven't figured that out by now. I'd add more but I have to pack for my trip... The only good thing is that I get out of school..
Update soon please!

It doesn't suck... just a little short. Good chapter though. Being sick ruins everything.

This was short. I like that Lorne is coming into, can he like change in and out demon form or is he just normal human. Oh, that whole being able to change out of demon form thing reminded me of Doyle! I know I've already asked for Lilah but I'll take that back. Doyle would be way more interesting than Lilah anyway.