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Reviews For: Before Shiryu

Hylianalchemist13
2004-02-15
ch 1,
abuseyay! i like it! i never know what to write in these review things...*is sad* oh well...it was a good story though...
~ryu
Saiyou-the-lover
2004-01-15
ch 2,
abuseteeheehee!Chisara I love your story!Ill bring you some cheese to school tomorrow!
Shiryu
2004-01-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it. I cant wait for you to continue to update. And I definatly cant wait till you're done so that we can write our story when we meet.
Ok, now you know me Chisara, so of course I'm going to correct you. You spelt since wrong through out the entire chapter. It's not sense(ex: You have a good sense of humor), it's since (ex: You havn't been here since yesterday). You also me and grammer so get it right!
Alright, keep updating.
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