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speadee
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
I read this at TeniPuri DSP, and I like it. Some parts made me nervous, and some almost drove me to tears. I'm glad things appear to be working out for them.
Loving Monday
2007-05-18 . chapter 1
This is a very nice story. You write well.
JOall
2007-04-30 . chapter 1
I hate the HUGE spacing >_< But I love the one-shot
i-see-faeries
2007-02-21 . chapter 1
Aw, how cute. ^^ This really was sweet. I usually don't like FujiRyo as much as TezuFuji, but this story is an exception. It really is rather heavy on the FujiRyo, and somehow that creates angst. LOL. Great job. But what happens to Momo and Echizen? It's unresolved! Haha.
The Theatre's Ventriloquist
2006-08-05 . chapter 1
...I love this. How sad. How wonderfully sad. It was written so beautifully~ I'm actually smitten...

Your way of writing was absolutely ensnaring and Tezuka and Fuji's relationship was beyond words of complement. It also showed the mirror relationships of sempai and kouhai when it came to Ryoma~

How bitterly sweet~! God, I love this.
angel hakusho
2005-09-25 . chapter 1
Waah Momo's divorced! and what about Echizen?

All in all it was a good story ::sniffs::

Momo... ::cries::
Moshi Moshi Mai
2005-02-12 . chapter 1
Aww that's so sweet! XD I loved it!

-Moshi Moshi Mai
Hikari no Yami
2004-11-15 . chapter 1
I'm an addict. It's finally been annouced. I have no idea how many times I read this fic already... At least 4 times I would say and each time I read it I find it just as exciting. You're an excellent author and this is an excellent piece of writing. I don't usually review anymore but I just had to make an exception for this fic. ^_^ And thanks for the added FujiRyo goodness. ^_^
yoshikochan
2004-10-02 . chapter 1
No! ~__~ *initial reaction* That was so good, I wanted to know so badly what happened with Momo and Echizen! And of course FujiRyo (loves this pairing) waa this story was great, it was all my favorite pairing and so much angst ~__~ -wants more-
akari
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Nyaa... I want Momo and Ryoma together. Haha, please write that too ok? Anyway, do you know your fic made me so depressed? I like happy endings but I like your fic anyway. :) Love the way you describe.
Isolde1
2004-07-20 . chapter 1
Incredible. There is no other words for it. Wow.
Silgidane
2004-01-19 . chapter 1
Ohh, so pretty. *__* I loved it, even though I am largely apathetic to TezuFuji. I adored the FujiRyo ambiguity and the flow of the writing. *takes a moment to pick self off floor* Ah, okay. Please hurry and write the Momo-Ryoma version/explanation because damn, I *really* wanted to hurt Momo when I read that part. :) Thank you!
rasinah
2004-01-18 . chapter 1
this is so lovely. breath taking even. kawaii...sigh, juz love it lots!! u r so good with tezufuji pairings!!
*all hail the great anek*
firedraygon
2004-01-08 . chapter 1
Poor Ryoma...he doesn't get any together with anyone in the end. >< UNLESS it was TezuFujiRyo. *perverted mind* XP
Please write more soon. This was wonderful!
~fd97
Myth720
2004-01-07 . chapter 1
oh that was great! i loved it.. the emotions just flew.. i've just gotten into the fandom and been searching for good Fuji/Tezuka fics. keep up the great work ^^
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