I loved it, up to this... um... interesting last chapter.

cute n' cool! great job! ;)

I loved you story. Please write more fanfics... I envy you because your story is the first one I've read that doesn't kill Mario off. and it didn't make me cry like the other ones. lol.

AMAZING STORY!! I liked the ending! It was getting all mushy and I was prepared to cry and stuff!! The ending is an absolute work of art!! I would never of expected this... Sheesh, those Marios like to bet all their money away don't they? Anyways, this stil goes in my favourites *story is favourited*!!

Nice job! I'm a Bowser and Peach fan, and this was a great story dedicated to them. I don't know why it says in your description that this ISN'T a Bowser and Peach fanfic, but nice work anyway. :-D

Dude! Don't feel sorry about the end! You had me scared that it WOULDN'T end like that! Holy Jeebus! Don't scare me like that! But anyway, yeah, very much liked the ending. Made the whole story better in my opinion. Keep up the good work! ^_~d Thumbs up!

Please just make chapter five the alternate ending. The story was actually kind of sweet, and you held everyone in character with such a diffucult story. You just kinda shattered the apeal with your second half of the conclusion.
Note: It was good, but the last few chapters had a certain amount off sap and moved a little to fast.

Please write more! +makes puppy dog eyes+
I lurve the story! ^-^ Pwease write more!!

heehee! man, i was ready to cry and everything! Why'd ya do that!?!? heehee! see, a fic like that is unforgettable.
m'kay, next!

This was a great story and wonderfully written. I'm not a fan of Bowser/Peach, but I -do- admit to being a fan of Bowser/Zelda *is writing one herself*.
The twist in the ending was excellent though I was nearly moved to tears by Bowser's 'death', poor guy..
*adds to her favorite stories list*

I forgot to say this before but I think I get the Shelly thing XD

O.o;; Well that was suprising O.o Very unexpected and funny at the same time ^^;;

No! I wanted it to be a sad and sweet and..and stuff. But it was still a very good story

Good story, as always, gotta love the writting style which is uniquely Robin Lee. Pretty sad though towards the end. Poor Bowser...
Bowser: yeah poor Bowser ;_;
Jes: Quiet you! *slap*
Bowser: owie!!
Anyway... you know what story I'm waiting for you to upload :D So quit making me... er I mean FFN wait!! I NEED STORY! :p

Me: OMG! How could you that?!
Aquamarine: And it was SO good!
Me: Aw, well...Great story!
Aquamarine: (Wants to spoil the ending)