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Sister to the Dark Lord
2009-02-09 . chapter 6
That was beautiful. Very heartfelt.
Bratanimus
2005-09-21 . chapter 6
Oh. My. God.

This was fantastic. Yes, I got teary-eyed many, many times. Thanks for a wonderful, heartwrenching fanfic. Thanks for creating such believable child, teen, and adult portraits of Remus. I'll be reading this one again.
lady patronus
2005-06-22 . chapter 6
Tragic, touching, and inspiring... Definetly a fav. Beautiful job!
Regina the Queen of Random
2005-03-27 . chapter 6
*claps hands* Well done! I haven't read a story that has touched me for so long! Thank you for writing it, it was very wonderful. Everything was very well described, right down to the end.
Thank you!
Regina the Queen of Random
2005-03-27 . chapter 2
Came across this story quite by chance, and I'm really enjoying it. Would stay and read more, but (whoops, almost wrote bit!) but I have a classics essay to write. I'l read more asap!
ProfessorSpork
2005-01-26 . chapter 6
I love how everything connects in your stories. Everything circulates, everything makes sense. Like it's where it *should* be. Nice work.
ProfessorSpork
2005-01-26 . chapter 3
Slipping in little Dora again, I see. What a little spotlight hog, lol.
ProfessorSpork
2005-01-26 . chapter 1
This is an entirely new perspective on the whole thing... wow...
Tante
2004-12-16 . chapter 6
OK, went through about 2 boxes of tissue. You write with such feeling. I love writers who make me feel what the characters are feeling. Well crafted! I'm quite impressed.
Blume
2004-10-12 . chapter 6
Damn! my box of kleenex has ran out! ;_; ife is not fair _at all_! when people like Remus have to face a lifetime of pain and gentle women like Elizabeth are bound to live in sorrow!
But I'll personally make sure Remus ends six foot underground even if it's the last thing I do!
...somehow Remus wouldn't think that comment is supportive...
I'm off to buy another box of kleenex and maybe a cup of coffee becasue mine has run out, keep the good job!
Nimue25
2004-07-31 . chapter 4
That part really did a number on my tear ducts! Wow. That was such good writing. Everything seems to be progressing in a natural fashion as well!
Nimue25
2004-07-31 . chapter 3
Another wonderful chappie! I love the way they seem to be close, but not close, if you know what I mean. They have a relationship still, even though they haven't talked that much in the last few years. Still have that familiarity with one another. Brilliant. But oh, so complicated!
Nimue25
2004-07-31 . chapter 2
Such a complicated relationship for Remus and Elizabith! I feel so badly for both of them... Great job with this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Nimue25
2004-07-31 . chapter 1
Well, this is looking like a wonderful fic! Well written. You can really tell that Remus is a young child by the narrative style you use here. And so sad. I always imagined that the werewolf that bit him was rather anonymous. Cool twist!
ScarletAngel68
2004-07-28 . chapter 4
*cries* Evil, evil, people...This is a brilliant fic, though. Hey, this one is on my birthday! Granted, I wasn't alive yet, but still, it was on July 10!
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