I really enjoyed this. Great use of descriptive language.

This is now one of my favorite stories by you. I'm glad I came across it.
Don't worry if it's been overdone; few could craft the idea as well as you.

aww! me likes ^.~
thank you plot bunny! *huggles it*
loved the metaphors and similies!
spirited away rocks!!
(woo- i think i overdid it on the exclamations points, ne?)

uh this is nice and all , but im still having a real hard time trying to make sense of it

Holy. Cats. However short, this has got the be the best description/use of words I've ever seen. Wow. You blow me away with your skill.

Hey, I really like all of the metaphores and silmilies in this, it's really quite beautiful, the picture it makes.

Amazing!!
really beautiful!
Love it!
Thanks!
Sil