can u finish it its good

I think that you should ud.

update!

...Interesting. Please update soon.

Great story keep writing

Great story keep writing

I hope you update soon. This is really a good start to a story.

Dude! Is this chapter to spite me or something? ugh. At least i'd heard of the clash:P And besides, at least i don't like eminem.:P good stuff. now you have to write more damnit!!

Dude, I like! I wanna see what happens, so I'm gopnna read the next chappy..bye!
-Ema

it was a cute little chapter, it's coming along nicely

Some people say that the whole Ellie/Sean thing doesn't work but I think they look good together. I like this Fanfic and wonder what Sean will do. He's getting supisious so please update soon!

hey i love this fics beginning i hope u update real soon!

It's no pathetic but really good! I love the whole Sean/Ellie thing. Keep writing I wanna see where this goes ^_^

Hey, I love all attempts at Ellie/Sean fics. But this is a good start. I'm intrigued.

aw thanks for the publicity! You really have something going here. I think it'll get better as you develop the story. It won't be pathetic once you figure out where it's all headed.