AMAZING!

*blinks, rubs eyes and blinks again* YOU UPDATED! AFTER ALL THIS TIME, YOU FINALLY UPDATED! *tackle hugs* I'M SO HAPPY THANK YOU! I'LL TAKE A SHORT CHAPPIE, I FINALLY HAVE AN UPDATE! Just please don't do that again. ^^;

WHAT?! T_T That was so short...-Goes cry in emo corner- I finally got around to reading the entire thing all over and that was such a a short chapter...T_T...

How would Omittchi know it was the best couch sex ever if he never had sex? Let alone couch sex? xD I hope you update soon

"Tasukeru watashi." Typically you'd just say "tasukete." In japanese the subjects and objects of sentences are often left off if it's understood in the context; there would be absolutely no confusion in that situation about whom Omi wanted Aya to help, therefore the verb stands alone.

It's not "iia," it's "iie."

Also your use of "nai" is consistently incorrect, in varying ways, and it would just be better for you to avoid using it altogether.

So far I'm interested, however there's one little thing:

"Omi sore Oroka baka!"

umm...I'm not fluent in japanese, but I'm pretty sure that isn't grammatically correct. It's totally obvious what you're trying to say, ("Omi, that stupid idiot," or something close) but...well...it's obviously "plug and play" japanese; just replacing english words with their japanese equivalents, which doesn't work since japanese and english are structured very differently.
Rather than "sore" you should use "ano;" "sore" typically refers to inanimate objects (at least I think that's the distinction; in any case I don't remember ever hearing it applied to people) and is a degree closer than would apply to Omi. (and "ano baka" is a common phrase heard in anime). Also I think you need to put "na" (or possibly "no") between "oroka" and "baka," (and I'm not sure, but I get a vague feeling I may have heard "oroka na baka" somewhere too). In any case, that would be closer.

O.o You're not going to give Omi grey hair like in Glühen...are you? (Sorry, I just find Omi's new hair color a tad disturbing...he's around ninteen to twenty when Glühen takes place, right? So his sudden change in hair color disturbs me. Greatly. *sweatdrop*

I really like the German -it's a nice touch. Just one problem: Schwarz is spelled...'Schwarz' not 'Schwartz'; there is not 't'. (Technically, it's not capitalized...but it is since it's used as a name it's capitalized, no? Ok, I'll stop blabbering...)

Ehehe...*sweatdrop* Thankyou for reading this random review from a random person.

SUGOI! *nose bleed* Man this rocks the hill so far. Ya know its the first fanfic I've read thats taken me more then a few hours to read for about a year.
This is also the first fic I've read thats changed the story while keeping things that happen in cannon and does so well. Congrats to you!
...though I really should watch the rest of the series...
Ja'matta'ne and keep writing!
-siany

I just spent 4+ hours reading through this. It's great how you go through everything in order of the series. I'm really enjoying this AU spin on the series, especially since it's only slightly AU. I'm hoping, though, that whenever you get to the Gluhen part of the story that Omi doesn't become Mamoru/Persia. I noticed that you killed off his grandfather early on, so I can't really think you would actually turn Omi into the emotionless character that was bred thoroughout the Drama CDs, etc. Last thing... I really hope this 4 month gap between updates is only somewhat of a hiatus, because I would really like to see where this goes. Keep it up.

In case, you didn't know, I make it a habit to review evey friekin chapter. Don't you think the fumis would just order more flowers? It'd have been easier that way. *shrug* But that's just me.

Okkei, I'm late. *looks over again* This is very methodical. Very very methodical. But it has a lot in it.

Nyu! I finally found some good Omi/Aya pairings! When is the next chapie gonne come out? You've also mentioned a Lemon, when is the lemon coming, I like 'em strong. ^^ (just playing)

Brillient! As always you have done a smashing job (I gotta stop readin so much Harry Potter >

Woo! I just found this story, and so far it's the best one i've read! Are they gonna sleep together in the next chap? Cause I've been hopeing for that each time I get to a new chapter.

Wai!! *LOL* I've been following your fic for a while now and love it!! Please update again soon!!