you do know that this sakura's name is realy sayuri right, but other than that I think this story ABSOLUTELY ROCKS!

please update more has potential

update please

Nice story. Has plenty of potential.

I'll make it quick and say UPDATE!

_ This is a really nice story...good idea...please update as soon as possible...

i love your story, and as far as i can tell it looks almost perfect, i found 1 or 2 misspelling or grammer problems, but i think you did a really good job on this story. You have natural talent, and i think you created a lot of narrative hook in this story and i am looking forward to reading the continuation! _ please get it up soon? please;_; please
Amanda

Haha! You actually had to do this in Guidance? _ Good luck on your Periodical Test!
This story is also really good! I love that you write it in a way that it is so easy to visualize as an anime episode (ie: describing their sweatdrops). _ Nah, not just that, just, the way you write makes it so easy to imagine it all happening.

Heh, nice! :)

very cute, i like it alot please continue soon!

cute story, but i recommend fixing the grammar. i.e.: instead of writing: "Why the hell will I write about him!", write: "Why the hell would I write about him!" or "The hell will I write about him!" uh...sorry you probably think i'm trying to make you feel stupid, but i'm not, i just have a problem, i have to correct people on grammar. forgive me thpugh, as i really enjoyed the first chapter, please write more, you are a good writer. _

Interesting assignment! Man, if my teacher ever assigned that topic for the essay, she'd get a blank page because that's personal! Lol. I can't wait to read more of this and what Ranma and Akane write! *Maura*

I like it! It seems to be cute, and i can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. CONTINUE!

He wants action
-need to be made in to past tense. this should be: He wanted action.
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There are a few other areas that need some attention. I'd recommend a preread. Preferably one that knows you and your writing style.
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Not a bad little story...
Have a great day.