|Reviews for Homework|
| ranma 12 fan1XD 12/18/10 . chapter 1
you do know that this sakura's name is realy sayuri right, but other than that I think this story ABSOLUTELY ROCKS!
| ry 4/6/04 . chapter 1
please update more has potential
| Sieg1308 3/12/04 . chapter 1
| A Knight 2/21/04 . chapter 1
Nice story. Has plenty of potential.
| Sniper-of-Death 2/17/04 . chapter 1
I'll make it quick and say UPDATE!
| solstjerne 2/5/04 . chapter 1
_ This is a really nice story...good idea...please update as soon as possible...
| ameanda-90 1/12/04 . chapter 1
i love your story, and as far as i can tell it looks almost perfect, i found 1 or 2 misspelling or grammer problems, but i think you did a really good job on this story. You have natural talent, and i think you created a lot of narrative hook in this story and i am looking forward to reading the continuation! _ please get it up soon? please;_; please
| carachan 1/10/04 . chapter 1
Haha! You actually had to do this in Guidance? _ Good luck on your Periodical Test!
This story is also really good! I love that you write it in a way that it is so easy to visualize as an anime episode (ie: describing their sweatdrops). _ Nah, not just that, just, the way you write makes it so easy to imagine it all happening.
| Fletset 1/6/04 . chapter 1
Heh, nice! :)
| hanabishi-sensei 1/5/04 . chapter 1
very cute, i like it alot please continue soon!
| kitty-catfu 1/5/04 . chapter 1
cute story, but i recommend fixing the grammar. i.e.: instead of writing: "Why the hell will I write about him!", write: "Why the hell would I write about him!" or "The hell will I write about him!" uh...sorry you probably think i'm trying to make you feel stupid, but i'm not, i just have a problem, i have to correct people on grammar. forgive me thpugh, as i really enjoyed the first chapter, please write more, you are a good writer. _
| AngelicFairy 1/5/04 . chapter 1
Interesting assignment! Man, if my teacher ever assigned that topic for the essay, she'd get a blank page because that's personal! Lol. I can't wait to read more of this and what Ranma and Akane write! *Maura*
| wornoutdancingshoes 1/5/04 . chapter 1
I like it! It seems to be cute, and i can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. CONTINUE!
| Kevin Joe Bays 1/5/04 . chapter 1
He wants action
-need to be made in to past tense. this should be: He wanted action.
There are a few other areas that need some attention. I'd recommend a preread. Preferably one that knows you and your writing style.
Not a bad little story...
Have a great day.