This is a great story1 As a fellow author, I know how annoying it is to write a story that gets very few reviews(only 1 at the time I am reading this). Nice job.

Mario: *crying waterfall Anime tears*
Me: This is so sad... I can't cry, you can't make me cry... WAH! THIS FANFIC IS BEAUTIFUL! SO SAD, SO ANGSTY! *sniffle* Excellent! EXCELLENT JOB!!