 vicky24 2007-03-25 . chapter 56please make a sequal to this story soon please please please i love it and then when the next sequal is up then we can find out more of what happens between cole and phoebe and their children and if it 1 baby or twins so please hurry with the sequal |
 daylemclaren 2006-06-22 . chapter 1Great story |
 PhoebelovesCole 2005-08-17 . chapter 56Hey,
I´m agerman reader and I love your story, but why don´t you go on with your story?
It makes me sad, that everytime I´m looking your still have not updated.
Please continue with your story.
PhoebelovesCole |
 Inkyfoot 2005-02-04 . chapter 56Of course it was lovely. What was I expecting - nothing less from she who has written THE Phoebe and Cole epic. I haven't been around this fandom for a while, and I came back to see if the new Magicmyth was up. What a delight to find it was.
I feel like I should wite something a bit more constructive than 'that was great I loved it' although it was and I did.
Cole too domesticated? I don't think so. He's older now, and I think this Cole, your Cole, wants that family life, and being with Phoebe means being in a family. The two aren't mutually exclusive anymore if they ever were. And I think someone with a real ache for children is hardly not going to delight in a domestic life when they've got two small magical children and an awful lot of inlaws.
This relates to all your work: this is the only Charmed fiction I've ever read that's broken out of 2D characterisation. I say Cole's a family man, and to be sure he is, and I feel this fiction is all about family and what that term means to begin with, but that's not all he is. Phoebe's a loving mother and devoted wife, but she's as mean and stubborn as hell sometimes. Every character has layers.
Not only that, but we have Mrs. Rinaldi, a character whom I positively love, school marmness and all. How many fanfictions (I hate that word - it doesn't do justice to what you've written) have OCs that matter and aren't just filler or the other link in a tedious love triangle? Too few, but this is one of the exceptions. Mark too before he croaked it and his Daffy Duck ties. See? I remember these things. And that shows something about the original characters. Do you write original fiction as well? I assume you probably must as you're so very good.
So, thank you for the ride really with these. I've read from To Know Phoebe, and I know that I wouldn't come back to reading Charmed for anyone else. It's been one hell of a journey from Phoebe sobbing and screaming in carparks for affirmation to two children and bastard retrievers.
How many years now? Must be three at least. |
 Tzarista 2005-01-20 . chapter 56loving it |
 Barb6 2005-01-19 . chapter 56Absolutely wonderful! I am so sorry to see the story end though - I want it to keep going. I want to read more about Phoebe and Cole and Patsy and Francesca and about Evil's plan to ruin the sisters financially. And what happens with Africa and Phoebe and the spirit winds. All of the details you put into this story make it all seem so real. I hope you have more planned. It is excellent! |
 Kelara 2005-01-17 . chapter 46 Wow, interesting way how the tribunal turned out with Phoebe telling the truth! It is really very well written and for me quite unexpectedly.
I truely enjoyed it but I fear I have no real respect of the Elders any longer either. |
 Barb6 2005-01-17 . chapter 48OMG - I love the exchange between father and son. It is so touching. I am so glad that Patsy was able to give Cole the knowledge that he was a good parent and that everything turned out alright. It is just so sad though to think of them gone. I can't wait to read more! |
 Kelara 2005-01-17 . chapter 45 I loved this chapter and am curious about the next ones! By the way I hope that we'll see some more of the other Guardians and Francesca as I really like these characters! |
 Tzarista 2005-01-17 . chapter 47:) |
 Tzarista 2005-01-17 . chapter 46:) good chappie |
 Tzarista 2005-01-16 . chapter 45great chapter |
 Katbaby 2005-01-15 . chapter 56 Great! Loved chapter 48 with Cole & Patsy; one of my favorite chapters in the whole series.
Chapter 52 was hilarious. Your characters as always stayed true to how you've written them. Thanks for the beautiful story. |
 Wicked R 2005-01-15 . chapter 18stopping here, not readin any further. this Cole is a bit too domesticised for me. |
 Tzarista 2004-12-26 . chapter 44great chapters i loved every bit of it |