 AFriend 2004-01-06 . chapter 2 This story was really good, with such intense emotions from characters that you really wouldn't expect it from. It was very well written, and should be continued |
 Laura 2004-01-05 . chapter 1 Yeah, I knew there were typos, but that sort of happened when fanfiction bot or whatever converted the file. I'm not quite sure how to fix that. As for the "emanate" word, I did actually mean to write that.
The word means to radiate - to come to or send fourth, as in "the light emanated heat". It was intentional, but I understand why it was mistook for an error. |
 Alliecat3 2004-01-05 . chapter 2Very unusual pairing, but you make it work. I very much like the slow pacing of this piece, and your lyrical descriptions. There are a couple of typos you might want to re-read to catch, and you use the word "emanate" when I suspect you mean "emulate", but it is a solid piece of writing and I hope you continue. |
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