|Reviews for The Return Of the vacuum Cleaner|
| CaptPicardNCC1701 2/15/07 . chapter 1
| Doctor of Writing 1/21/05 . chapter 1
Okay...this is uhh...interesting.
| DarkElastic 12/16/04 . chapter 1
I lost what was happening at the beginning with your descriptions because they are so clumped together, but thought it was funny as hell. Especially the bit about Sir George being a serial killer - but lost mysefl after that in that spaghetti of an explanation.
Great. Hope the next installment is easier to follow.
| SnudgeB 1/6/04 . chapter 1
Excellent Story, I am looking forward to next installmen. One thing, length holds no bounds, so make it a tincie bit Longer. Good story, 10/10. Review Starship Arlond!