good

Okay...this is uhh...interesting.

I lost what was happening at the beginning with your descriptions because they are so clumped together, but thought it was funny as hell. Especially the bit about Sir George being a serial killer - but lost mysefl after that in that spaghetti of an explanation.

Great. Hope the next installment is easier to follow.

Excellent Story, I am looking forward to next installmen. One thing, length holds no bounds, so make it a tincie bit Longer. Good story, 10/10. Review Starship Arlond!