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animefreakshow
2009-08-12 . chapter 22
I really wish you would finish this. I know you haven't even updated in like four years, but this story is really good. Please finish it, please?
silver
2007-11-13 . chapter 2
the comment about them not knowing they are related remined me of Oedipus Rex
Schmoky Salad
2006-09-02 . chapter 22
:o if i was in Trunks' position, i'd choose marron lol

when r u gonna get 23 up?! its bothering me i rely wanna see who he chooses, and if marron and cali will eva be happy again! lolz

- Schmoky Salad
stephie2010
2006-06-13 . chapter 22
I chose Marron 110%. I like Marron and Cali much better than Kyera and Daphne. Daphne is mean! Plus, Trunks and Cali need 2 get a better relationship. Great story!! Continue asap!
Kwampler
2006-02-25 . chapter 22
You have to be kidding me? I have t wait?! NO. I would pick marron. One she was there first, and two shes his mate. I like her and cali better anyways
Jeffrey
2005-09-27 . chapter 22
I've been reading this story and I like it. And to answer the qustion. I would pick Marron. I pick her becasue she is the mother of there child and I know what Marron did was wrong not telling Trunks about Cali but still he had a feeling about it and should of gone with it. I also pick her becasue she is the love of Trunks life (my opinion)and when ever there not together they get staggers of pain within there hearts. And because he still has feelings for her. And what they say is "Your first love is your true love" it sometimes dosen't always happen but I'm trying making a point. That is my answer
Malicious_Ninja
2005-08-17 . chapter 1
Yo Jayme its disturbed-chibi,here just to let you know i will be retiring from fanfiction,anyway good work.
Pasjuh
2005-08-13 . chapter 22
heey long time no seen! 2 short chapters tho..
and a anaswer on the question..i hope marron..not because i just like t/m storry's but if trunks chooses kyera marron will die and who will cali have left then? she sais she cant call him father..lol BUT thats my opinion!

keep up the good work! kissis!
Mayhembass
2005-08-10 . chapter 22
And Marron wins by a landslide! C'mon what do you think you're gonna hear? It's good keep it up I'll keep my vote nuetral just to give them both a chance and cuz i'm like Sweden small and and nuetral as long as you keep writing this.
Navka
2005-08-09 . chapter 22
Finally you updated. Ok, the question, I would choose marron because they are meant to each other(I mean they are bonded and they should be together).
African Uub
2005-07-30 . chapter 1
When are you going to update this story. I like it and want it a uodate.
animechick
2005-04-07 . chapter 21
you didn't have to add a demon in the stories those kids have enough problems as it is so just don't keep the demons in the storie or if you do get rid of them quickly because this story is really good but the demons clash with the fullness of the storyline just dosen't really fit in that well (suggestion)
if you keep the demons don't make it boring
please e-maiol me when you update this story
animechick7645@
Mayhembass
2005-01-10 . chapter 21
Lol it's good as if my life wasn't filled with enough drama I thought hey wait a minute I know where I can turn for some high-grade fictional drama. Your story! But kidding aside you're doing well and I think you must continue. And I think the omen means that there shall be much trouble in the future and possibly *dun dun dun* death.

Peace, Love, and Free Food
Mayhembass
solo wing alpha
2005-01-08 . chapter 21
hey keep going
Pasjuh
2005-01-07 . chapter 21
wow great...devi-dphne...good thinking girl:)
and i dont know what desdemona's omen mean lol sorry:p i quess i have to see that in the next chapter?:o girl keep up the good work:D

x Pasjuh love ya
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