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Reviews For: I Have Never Seen the Sky
funkless 2004-06-06 . chapter 1
It would be incredibly beautiful to see the sky. To be the first human in centuries to gaze upon something so fantastic.

You captured Trin's emotions perfectly. I have to agree with the other reviewer- you caught her ectasy and bottled it into this beautiful fic.

Just reading it made me feel so happy.
Tearlit 2004-01-06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet. I loved the last three sentences. It pulled it all together and made it touching.
Dil 2004-01-06 . chapter 1
omg... that is such a perfectly-timed/written piece of work. as ashamed as i am to say it, tears were actually in my eyes! nearly cryed.. *sniff* i think you just captured trinitys thoughts exactly...
keep writing x
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