 salena99 2005-03-29 . chapter 1 I tried to imagin this several times while watching the movie but now I get to read it! PLEZ DON'T STOP. |
 Tamer Jessie 2004-06-20 . chapter 5Very nice! |
 Mermaid Ninja 2004-05-11 . chapter 5 I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. |
 TheGreenBat 2004-03-31 . chapter 1OH OH OH CAN I HAVE THE DOUBLE DECKER BUS? Sos I LIKED THIS ONE I LIKED IT ALL PLEASE READ MY FIC PLEASE I BEG ITS CALLED THE BUSSES |
 Android 25 2004-02-20 . chapter 4Update please this story is good! |
 Jesshire 2004-01-11 . chapter 1 heey! Vickie! I really like ur fic! and anyone who gotta say otherwise *Cracks knuckles and evily glares* lets say they won't know what hit them! MWAHAHAHAHA!...Sig...Sig's funny...im not sure cherry... funny...awkward silence...anyways get fic blah bitty blah blah all that crap
TTFN =) |
 Lizzy Rebel 2004-01-09 . chapter 4You MUST continue with the story. It's very good, exact storyline as the Mummy Returns. And I should know, it's my favourite movie. I love the way who you found a character from MR for each character in J2. Jonathon and Daxter are so alike it's scary. I like what you did with Tess! LOL, very funny. My only suggestion is maybe putting the J2 charatcers' emotions into the story. Like, what does Keira feel when she's about to be thrown into the fire in chapter 3? Or what does Jak feel when Little Jak is taken? It would make things more interesting (not that it isn't already. Toddles.
"There's nothing wrong with you that a little reincarnation won't cure." |
 Lizzy Rebel 2004-01-06 . chapter 2*chuckles* My, my, my this is certainly a CUTE story. Quite original, too. I love it *claps* My only suggestion is reading your story over before you post... but then I can't talk much since I have the same problem *grins* please update soon! |
 DarkJakLuverandTora 2004-01-06 . chapter 2 weird but col, i love that movie!
Tora: 'nuff said |