Reviews for Ranma: Aijou & Aitou

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Ravioli 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseHiya I used to read this some years ago and review but fanfiction became too addicting for a while and I quit, also real life took over. I did enjoy your writing, and if you ever decide to publish original works let us, fanficcers, know! I hope the new year treats you well.
Haruka Minamino 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abuseIt's a shame you no longer write fanfiction. I still think it's a God-given talent to be able to write anything at all. In any case, Godspeed.
Mike 2007-09-28 ch 25, anon.	abuseim sorry that you are quitting the scene, but I understand your addiction. I my self have problems deciding when to stop reading and writing.
Passin' Through 2007-09-27 ch 25, anon.	abuseFirst, kudos for finding others to continue your story's and thereby ensuring that others can enjoy what you began. But, oh Johnny, why, why didn't you ask someone that was better to continue Aijou and Aitou? While Calamity-Queen of Cordite is a competent choice for your other story, Transcending Time, Driver Jim Ohki isn't. I'm basing this on the his story The Goddess Dilemma - Gold Edition that I have read. If he continues this in the same type of style and thinking that permeates that story, I can tell you that this is going to sink like the Titanic - only faster. Please keep this in mind: Any writer that doesn't accept that any negative, but constructive, criticism of their work and take steps to ensure others won't see those criticisms has no business messing with something as wonderful as this. Ozzallos, BTB and Sinom Bre would have been a far, far better choice. Have you tried asking any of them?
Wolff 2007-09-26 ch 24,	abuseWell, damn. I'm gonna be sorry to see you go, man. You've started a couple of stories that I've really enjoyed, and it's sad that they'll likely never be finished. About all I can say is that I hope you manage to get yourself back to the place you want to be in your life, and that I hope we'll see you around again some day. Good luck. -W
Dane17-B 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseIt's sad to see you go. This was one of the better stories on this site. It truly explored how a relationship can be built on or destroyed. Our loss will be your family's gain. I do not know if others have asked this or not (I've just recently got back up after a long haitus), but I would respectfully request if you could give us permission to finish this story (It only had eight chapters to go.), and give us any outline for it you had developed. I, for one, would like to see how it ends. I hope the rest of your life will be prosperous and enjoyable for you and your family. God speed.
anon 2007-09-23 ch 24, anon.	abuseI understand and respect your decision. If and when your FF Account goes, so does your body of work. Will they be archived anyplace else? Perhaps zipped or as a PDF? Or will you erase all traces of your authorship? Hopefully, archives of your work will exist, but I would understand if you did not desire this to be so.
thmanwithnoname 2007-09-23 ch 24,	abuseHonestly, there aren't enough good ranma stories that I can feel anything but sadness at another one being abandoned. That said, I understand your reasoning, and admire you for trying to make a positive change in your life, and trying to adhere more closely to your beliefs. Your writing will be missed.
Eastern Cat 2007-09-20 ch 24,	abuseI know this must be a hard decision. It's hard to balance writing and someone's personal life. Good luck! Sayonara! Hungarian Tiger
Chibi-Chipmunk on Crack 2007-09-19 ch 24,	abusei see, as sad as i am, i can understand. Good luck to you.
possom2009 2007-09-19 ch 24,	abuseI'm saddend that you are no longer writeing, but can understand your reasons. I beg you to let some one else continue your wonderful work! Please!
Talent Scout 2007-09-19 ch 24,	abuseQuit if you must but it terribly bad manners to leave devoted fans on a cliffhanger I at least think you should make either a) a fight chapter with a small epilogue or b) a fight chapter and an epilogue chapter. Quit after that since you have good reasons but come on JohnnyG give us closure on this story at least
E.A.W.A.F. 2007-09-18 ch 24, anon.	abuseO.M.G. You know, sitting here at my computer, at 1:20 in the morning, I am torn. I can't belive what i'm reading. Seriously. It's almost sureal. I mean I can remember reading the 1st chapter of Aijou & Aitou when it came out. I was like 'Oh look a ranma kasumi ficcy! There's like only 10 of those out there and 2 are worth reading! wow!' And i read through the 1st chapter thinkin that it's the most we'll written, in cannon pieces of fanfiction i've ever read. So like i'm hooked immediatly. You know it's all cool and stuff chapter's are comin out quick and i'm thinking this fic could be one of the best ranma fics ever right? And then it starts to slow down, the updates are a little more spaced out and take a little longer to surface. And i'm like 'Ok then i can wait! No sweat'. I procceed to read all you other fics just waiting for the next chapter to come out. And me personally, i tend to check in every few days to to see if it's been updated but really i'm not worried about it to much cuz JonnyG has got a plan right? I mean it says right there in the the beggining that you've already got how many chapters the whole story is gonna be and it seems like you've already got a plan set out on how to get to the end so what's there to worry about? It'll get done hehe... BUT NO... year's john. Been waiting years. I can't belive its actually been that long. I've been reading fics on this sight for almost a decade. I've read hundreds of thousands of stories lol. I've seen long one's and short one's. Bad one's and good one's. One's in english and one's not. I thought you were different JohnnyG, I thought you were one of the best. I was wrong John. Dead wrong. Your just like all the rest of the two bit plot hole authors out there. Actually no your not, your worse, you fall into the catagory of quitter John. At least those authors out there with bad grammer/yaoi/yuri guy on guy on it bangin eachother till dawn still have the decency to put 'and then they lived happily ever after (bangin eachother)' at the end of there stories. But you can't even do that...sigh Gosh i'm tired of unfinished fics. Especially the good one's. Your's was good John. Real good. But now it will go down as just another What if or might have been. I trully hope your happy with it. P.s. Just speakin from the heart. You don't know me and i dont know you but i just wanted to give a review that many must feel but most won't say.
JSB 2007-09-17 ch 24,	abuseI see your point man. Being a Christian myself, I have also wondered if this is the right path I've been following, which it probably is not. Be that as it may, you have probably made the right choice. Fanfiction is only a hobby, which is mainly for those still in school, but your family is your life, so go enjoy your time with them while you still have it. I wish you the best of luck my friend, and may you succeed in your future without fail.
Ayanami Rei II 2007-09-17 ch 24,	abuseI have loved your stories and it is sad to see that you are leaving the fanfiction world altogether, and I may not be someone who reviews much if at all, do know that I have liked all your written stories so far, especially when I get to glimps psrt of the unfinished chapters in TFF. However as you are a married man, your family should comes first and for that I respect you, as I am single I can't really relate to you much but I do believe that Family is more important as being a good father figure being a Catholic myself. I do hope that you might reconsider keeping your profile and stories up so that we and the future of fanfic readers/writers would have a great example and motivation/target to achieve as it would be greatly missed. I'm normally a person with few words and this is one of the rare times I write so much in a review, but I do imply to you to not totally give up fanfiction forever but instead take a break from the fanfiction world to do what you need to do, a year? two? ten? twenty? When your children are all grown up and you need a hobby to past your free time in your older years, we would be glad to see your story again in the future if you would choose to do so. I think I better stop here, as my eyes are beginning to get teary. So I would like to wish you all the best and May the Almighty GOD bless you and your family always. Ayanami Rei II @ Rei-Chama

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