 tinkita 5/12/12 . chapter 11Good story! |
 Kitten Meru 4/20/12 . chapter 11Hahahahaha that was awesome! |
 Kitten Meru 4/20/12 . chapter 11Hahahahaha that was awesome! |
 Wolf Dragon Demon 4/2/12 . chapter 11Really good fic, I'm quite sure I've read this chapter before but I guess I forgot to review. Either way I really enjoyed it. |
 Dragonanzar 1/21/12 . chapter 11Very cute story. I'm glad everything turned out fine. Thank you for writing and completing. |
 RemySevvyFan 11/22/11 . chapter 11 Great story!
The last sentence is the best of the whole ff.
It was a little short but it's good written. |
 Munku-JGSPTV 10/20/11 . chapter 11Hi thanks for writing this story. I liked it except for the nipple thing and a few other things that were a bit weird, and it gave me some ideas to write my own fic, maybe with a Deaf Severus and Albus Severus. |
 Reader-anonymous 8/16/11 . chapter 11Lucius Malfoy...
her mother's trunk - I thought her mother was a Muggle (a therapist for newly discovered deaf people)?
Harry smiled, glad that Megan was getting along with Severus, glad she was in Ravenclaw if it meant he didn't automatically hate her.
Harry had been writing ... DADA for the wizarding world for over six years - How would he explain magical books from 'a Muggle'? Ah, a pseudonym.
...Severus might not even love him any more. The Potion's Master might be happier with Lucius and be glad that Harry was gone from their lives...
He couldn't hide from Severus when he was blaming himself for something he couldn't help.
I am here to stay, for as long as you'll have me
Severus really did still want him, still loved him. He relaxed into the arms that now held him up and knew that after fifteen years he had finally found home again.
a pureblood wizard - His mother is a muggle-born witch.
But the thing she found herself unable to forgive him for was abandoning Professor Snape... - It's difficult for Harry to think that somebody can still care for him, after all these years.
In his mind just because he still loved me, didn't mean I still loved him, if I loved him at all. Your father was a brave boy during school, he always did the right thing and stood up for other people but rarely for himself.
he wouldn't be able to stay at Hogwarts and not tell Remus the truth - Scent-masking glamours?
white haired? I thought he was black-haired or brown-haired.
It is very beautiful.
-Well soon I'll be like a zoo, a snake, a dragon, who knows what's next?- Christmas Firebird.
...the small dragon that was still curled around his wrist...
If it's so easy to open a portal, why did Voldemort never use demons?
-three minutes after she left that he told me she had passed.-I have done what every parent in the world wants to do, I have taught my skills to my child and she has surpassed me-
Thank you. Happy ending, even if somewhat theatrical with demons' attack. I enjoy presence of dragons and firebird and snake. |
 vampiremuggle 8/8/11 . chapter 11Awesome story! I loved it!
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 iceblueshadows 6/13/11 . chapter 11Very cute |
 moonprincess97524 5/3/11 . chapter 11This is such a wonderful and somewhat sappy story. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
 phoebuscat 10/26/10 . chapter 5 And now it becomes unbelievably unrealistic! You truly do not understand Snape if you believe he would EVER suck nipples in front of anybody, or do anything resembling a baby! Neither would he ever whine. This sounds more like what YOU would like him to do and say to you, but it is NOT Snape. At all.
Also, you really need to use a beta-reader for your stories. Too often, you are leaving out whole words, your grammar is off and punctuation missing. Also, it is things like "Get you shoes" and "Get YOUR shoes". Guess which one is the correct version? And at one time, you switched to the first-person view. Those are all things that can be avoided with some care.
That said, I do believe you have a talent for story-telling, and if you work out the kinks... |
 vd.alfredo 10/4/10 . chapter 11sweet
can't say anything more |
 123claire123 7/10/10 . chapter 11brilliant story - loved the last line |
 ceara1888 6/10/10 . chapter 11I loved this story, was so sorry to see it end. I hope that you may consider writing a sequil somehow to this |