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Silvermane1
2009-11-15 . chapter 6
cool
fresh42jazz
2009-10-25 . chapter 11
I have re-read this story many times before, and I love it each time. The ending line of the last chapter (“Your grandmother first,” Megan said forcefully, “She is the only person I want to tell who I know we won’t walk in on having sex.”) always makes me laugh. :)
Rori Potter
2009-08-28 . chapter 11
To true. That was great.
kitcat19us
2009-05-06 . chapter 1
This story is one of my all time favorites!! I love this story a lot!
arwin-urban
2009-03-16 . chapter 11
aw so cute! really good story!
Murphyangel
2008-12-03 . chapter 11
Fantastic story!
May Eve
2008-08-20 . chapter 11
Fantastic! This is such an entertaining story! Well done! ^^
aishababy
2008-08-06 . chapter 11
This was absolutely fabulous! I mean it just simple, clean, romance. Beautiful!
Bookie-Sensei
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
omg! sounds exciting! I love the plot already, it's EXTREMELY original as far as I know.
luvdarkharry
2008-06-13 . chapter 8
When did she start Herbology? Because even if she wasn't thinking 'Harry Potter', she should have known her father was from the magical world after she realized 90% of his garden was magical plants for his potion making.
Katalara
2008-05-27 . chapter 11
Very cute... Loved the story, looking forward to reading more of your work.


=^..^=
Badbonita
2008-05-14 . chapter 11
That is wonderful. The epilogue is kinda sweet as well. Potter, Snape and Malfoy will be united in any children that Megan and Lucian have.
Liked the little dragonet of Harry's and William the christmas fire-bird. I'm sure that Harry wrote a couple of children's stories regarding the pair of them. *grin* Especially since he could have the real characters model for him.
I did notice a couple of times you got Lucius and Lucian mixed up as well as saying that Lucian was Lucius's son instead of grandson but I don't recall where and neither of those things detracted from the story.
It was amusing that Hogwarts castle was the one to betray Harry's continued existance to Albus.
Anyway, enjoyable, sweet story.
RomanGoddess4eva
2008-05-02 . chapter 11
Omg! I loved this story so very much!! It was awesome, and I loved it, and it's awesome!
mira
2008-05-01 . chapter 5
I really liked the first three chapters, even with all the spelling and grammar mistakes. But the end of the fourth chapter feels just wrong. The explanations and declarations are way to rushed, the characters behave in a most unbelievable way, even for fanon. I don't recognize Severus at all, with his suckling at Harry in front of other people, his whining and his over-emotional behavior. I enjoyed the last hour but know I have to cut reading this story for it takes turns I'm not comfortable with.
misfit writer16
2008-03-31 . chapter 10
love it
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