Very good, the perspectives from each of the characters are easily recognisable. I like it. Write more soon would ya?! :-)

Ok I have to tell you this. I don't even read BoP fanfics anymore. A long time ago i read ur Survivor series and Good day in Hell, I loved them. So I put you on my authors alert list and then the other day you popped up.
This was great. Your getting me hooked on this stuff again. I loved.
Are you sure its 'FIN'? I hope not. Its great and while I'm at this you never finished Good Day in Hell and I really liked that one... so if you have any free time... =)

Wow, i love your humor, it cracks me up. Your pretty good. Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting patiently for your next chapter.

This is really good, please continue. I would love to read more from this story.

Wow! Great story. Please please more.

Thats it? Your just going to leave it at that, and not tell us what happens? You can't do that. PLEASE write more. PLEASE.
Great story though I really did love i.

wow!
You got both Helena and Barbara's characters down fantastically and with such ease too. The amount of tension and light heartedness is just right :) Just a question though, is the story over already? But it just started right? Please, pretty please, you've got to continue...

Amazing work, Shawn. I hope you keep going with this story.

Nice. You really do write these characters well. I do so enjoy reading your storys. Is there going to be more? Keep up the good writing. Cheers :)