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   PhoenixFireFourteen 12/2/12 . chapter 18awww beautiful :) |
| littleLaralevin 4/26/11 . chapter 18 This story was fantastic! I can't believe I only found it now :) |
| lolchika21 8/8/10 . chapter 10 2 chapters later aand i still think she needs 2 hit him in the face |
| lolchika21 8/8/10 . chapter 7 i think she needs to hit him |
| Cap-has-Attitude 7/24/10 . chapter 18 Awww...love it! |
| mrs.prongs 2/4/10 . chapter 18 i LOVED it! although i think i like it better in james' version |
| BitterBirch 5/18/09 . chapter 1 wii |
| RandomBoringStuff 5/6/09 . chapter 18 aww! that was so cute! she finally said yes! took long enough! |
| HPbringssexyback 12/25/08 . chapter 18 omg the "first" kiss between l and j totally shoudve made lilyian like drunk like all hehhehehehhe and making silly faces and crapola like thatola from Harry Potter brings the sexy back And therefore, so must James |
| FrEaKyFrEaKyFrEaK 12/25/08 . chapter 16 *heavy breathing* she... him... |
| grammurlemur 12/25/08 . chapter 11 check your usage. you often confuse homophones, which are two words that have different meanings and spellings, but sound alike. i've definitely found 2 'to's where there should be 'too's. DISCLAIMER: i am not trying to flame, just be helpful to improve your writing. also, the misspelling of grammar in my name is on purpose to look like the end of lemur. LOL rite? /the\ r |
| HPbringssexyback 12/25/08 . chapter 10 G-D lily just frigging start callin him jamsie-poo not potter*icily* from, Harry Potter brings the sexy back |
| HPbringssexyback 12/25/08 . chapter 7 GR james is so hot lily give him a frigging chance! from, Harry Potter brings the sexy back |
| HPbringssexyback 12/25/08 . chapter 6 plz make ur chappies longer! and seriously lily get over yourself and give the poor guy a chance! from, Harry Potter brings the sexy back |
| HPbringssexyback 12/25/08 . chapter 4 LOL but i totally TOTALLY wouldve melted at the poem. aww! lily should get over herself and go out with the guy. low blow by alice too! i thot she was cooler than that from, Harry Potter brings the sexy back |
