I read this story a while ago and I liked it so much I spent the last half-hour trying to find it again!

oh god...this is just so nice and touching...but why did you make legolas to be such a ...loose person? but its nice nevertheless

i wonder who the adulteress is...

Fluid. Beautifully written. Excellent story and plot. Kept me guessing. Also, extremely sad. How heartbreaking. The lies and deceit in this fic were excellent...Great story! (Reviewere mumbles to herself.) *I wish I could write like that!*

Wow. That was really good. I liked it. You write really well and I like a lot of your stories/fics. ~ Rock Baby

Beautiful writing, very poetic and fluid! I applaud your majestic skills, and hope to read more of your work.

Wow! That was so great and such a wonderful twist! You explained so much in so little words! :oD! Well done, my friend! I look forward to more form you! :oD!

yeh, like you said: not very elven behaviour but pretty good story line, well written too.

this is really great
i don't mind arwen being in this fic at all
in fact i like legolas/arwen pairing

good chappy! i like. who is she?? that was legolas rite?? in ur story he likes Arwen, and the girl is married to his brother? just want to make sure i got this rite. is this a vignette or are you going to write more?? just wondering. you can just email a reply to me if it is a vignette or if there is another chappy write a note to me or something. good chappy!

Wow.that's all i can really say. i really liked this story, and the way it was written. v. good job.

oh I don't know what to say. I loved this. It was so tragic and I couldn't stop the tears from forming in my eyes to save my life. Very well written, I think you did a beautiful job portraying the hopelessness of being in love with someone who does not love you back. Just wonderful.

That is what I call a heartbreaking story! Very sad, but very good! Keep writing please! ;)

WOW!
this is good written.. but, i don't like much the idea of him loving Arwen, it's not right...
Besides that, it is all planed to this ending, and it's really good.
I like it!
You should write a longer fic... but not an Leg/arwen one ;)
:hug: :hug:

I tend not to read fics that involve Arwen, for I really don't like her.
People tend to either make a charachter up and give her Arwen's name, or , rarely, write about the true Arwen (that in my opinion, means write about nothing.).
But I didn't know this fic had her name in, so I started reading it. When I read "Arwen" i was tempted to drop the fic there and leave it, but then i thought I might as well read the few lines I had left.
well I'm glad I did, for it has been a real nice scretch of thought. Arwen is there, but in reality she's nowhere, so she really doesn't effect the fic. And this humanity these two elves have feels real.
Really a nice job

mm... very bitter. but a bitter style of sweet.. hm did that make sense? it is very bitter but contains some sweetness that is considered bitterness HAHA okay i'll stop with the tastes. hmm i like it a lot. yes yes. 2 divorces JUS KIDDING hehe. yes I like it alot :)