Great job. It's sad that O-Ren had to die though

Hum, well, I doubt arrogant kenshi from Feudal Japan would talk that freely, but it's a nice enough dream.

Aw they're so cute together x_X Which makes Oren's death even more sad TTTT Great job on this

too bad O-Ren gets screwed (figuratively and Literally) by Shira

Kawaii, sugoi, sugoi! i loved it. Magatsu is my fav. character and that was great fic of him, considereing how little his relationship with o-ren was in the manga.

This is a great fic...I love Tai Tai !

Two words, very kawai, Since Magatsu is my favorite swordsman after Manji and Kenchin(when he was still a slasher that is) and the pair up with was Kawaii even in the manga. At least in the latest issue, Magatsu gets revenge by killing Shira (Yeah Shira, that teaches you to mess with a guy that has weird hair)

This was a very well written peace of work. Welldone. On another subject, could you do me or any other Blade of the Immortal fan fiction writers out there write a fan fic about Shira. Im sorry if it offends any Oren/Magatsu fans out there but Shira simply KICKS ASS. I think you could write a real chiller about him. Anyway good work keep it up

I'm probably the only one alive who actually thinks that Magastu and O-Ren -weren't- necessarily madly, deeply in love in the manga. That doesn't make this story any less enjoyable, however, and I loved the depth that you've added to the relationship - the 'third rule of war' actually could explain Magatsu's behavior in Heart of Darkness. The style you used was simple but well-done, and the story flowed wonderfully - it was great how you started, with O-Ren making eyes at Anotsu instead of Magatsu, and the reason that she ended up falling in love with him was excellently done... It makes -me- feel warm and fuzzy over the guy... awk. Tai-tai. Swoon. P It's nice how you explained some history as well, how he and Anotsu met, etc. All in all, it was a great story... I felt heavy inside the whole time, it's so happy, and yet we all know how their saga -really- ends... sniff. Wonderful story.

great fic man! love the way u wrote it! i've always got a soft spot for good ol' magatsu...love the 'third rule of war'...haha

That was a really sweet fic.

awwww, i loved this fic! it was sooo cute! i own so far, most of all these comics...and i love 'em all! hehehe-your story is awesome. Doesn't Oren die though, in the manga? well, that's besides the point! _ nice work, keep it up! Cassie

I have never read BOTI before, but reading your fic makes me want to read it even more! @_@ Really great story! ;

Sweet romance...So sad. A good fic though.

That was sooo...cute. Tai-Tai is one of my favorite characters, and I thought that you handed him very well. _